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CONCLUSION even 1% character can be trash. MC said himself he'd spend more than 5k to acquire his character
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Pacing on setup is incredibly hard to give critique for. Some people enjoy the super descriptive imagery of some stories while others like "hey this is bob, he goes to school" end of introduction.
As for pacing, think of ways to draw out a rise, but not to the point where you lose interest. Then hit a climax to resolve the issues you've set up through the conflicts. Usually they are brief, but not OHKO. Generally speaking, it causes disinterest. It should feel like as you proofread it you want to read faster and faster, until your beath can't keep up with saying it out loud, then you should end it. Your fall should have elements of the next rise but also be written in a calmer expression to leave readers still in the sense of euphoria of accomplishment.
Before you start writing you should brainstorm world rules, character personalities, plot, backstories, and think out the general of why such actions occurred. Really put yourself in each of the characters shoes and make decisions like: Snap with your arrogant self then reply to yourself in a passive aggressive manner. Don't just write a blog, make a world.
This is about all I can give advise for something I can't read... Good Luck
But it is hilarious, I do agree
Unbreakable Spear is better than unbreakable sword. With a spear you can cut like a dagger, swing/sweep with the shaft, stab, and with a flexible pole, can alter stab location mid-thrust. It has the ultimate ability of spatial control.
The only time a sword gains the advantage is if they can close the distance at which spear becomes staff.
Gotchya. If you want to argue superhuman and say a swordsman can project ki and throw it, so can a spearman. It just takes more ki to cover a larger surface. You could say but it's harder to deflect the various vectors that a sword can cross, but its just as hard to block a jab with a sword. As long as the spearman controls space, the sword cannot hit.
Lastly, a spear preforms worse against more enemies. IE why phalanx formation has a weak right side. Hedgehog formation can be impenetrable until someone crushes it by being suicidal since people will die anyways. But hedgehog wouldn't be used by superhumans anyways
Let's be real, Aaron couldn't improve because he didn't listen. Training increases muscles and reflexes, but rest and reflection brings enlightenment and muscle repair.
Edit if you find one let me know cuz imma hop on that shit rn
Is what was asked
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I remember him, what I don't understand is "Don't Move"...?
Is what was asked as clarification
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told him to drink an unknown potion from the game world. Their relationship is amicable with mutual interests where one cooperates with information and the other with synchronization rate. With his real body exposed drinking something unknown it puts him in a lot of danger
Is the reason he said, "don't move"
Awakened are able to use their abilities and stats to the extent of their synchronization rate in case you forgot since it's been like a year since it was previously shown
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Narlo was put to sleep using advanced technology, then had his brainwaves scanned to hijack his in game character. When Ling Ce (MC) found that out, he formed a strike team to rescue Narlo, a member of their raid team. Narlo, imprisoned at the Delro secret island underground, was guarded by a robot that somehow had the abilities of awakened. As a way to sneak in MC and friends flew over and dropped out of the plane in a submarine while MC jammed the radars so the team could infiltrate the island. Upon arriving at the island, they received information that a banquet would be hosted there. They disguised themselves as band members to sneak in when MC was caught by the butler while looking for Narlo. The butler showed his contempt to the Delro family for treating Narlo poorly by helping MC and gang free Narlo.