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Cookie Muncher
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Cookie Muncher Segan - 1722350683
the author had reasonable ways to make the characters grow (change) when setting the outline of the story. It's more that s/he didn't want to have a MC development and focused on the development of the side characters.
My point was: to do all this work raising a side character, why would they kill them off at the first real conflict?
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Cookie Muncher - 1722349724
So far a child could write a better story
Chapter 1
• My dad sucks
• I inherited money and became a NEET
• I got sucked into a video game
Chapter 2
• I'm somewhere I don't know
• Recall that my dad sucks
• realize I'm in the video game
Chapter 3
• I need to lie to survive
• Now that I know I'm in a video game I'll use its skills
• keep moving slowly and use skills to plot an escape
248 pages later - Chapter 4
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Cookie Muncher - 1722317431
time to rat out the location of #1 demon lord
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Cookie Muncher - 1722314313
its a fucking roach
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Cookie Muncher - 1722311038
A warm welcome... Pshhhh its going to be a cold shoulder
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Cookie Muncher - 1722303955
I always hate how they say knowing more doesn't help you
Everything I've read always gives milestones for perfect ascension and without hitting those milestones, it cause the future ascension to have a lower chance or impossible
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Cookie Muncher - 1722285037
This is TOATALLY where I parked my car
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Cookie Muncher - 1722275196
ummm. there's a thing called supply and... you know what? I'm just gonna retard this logic
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Cookie Muncher - 1722218330
What's the use of more money when he already has an unlimited black card lul
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Cookie Muncher - 1722215867
Monster Trainer vs Murim analogy

level = steps between realms (1-9 of each realm usually)
tier = cultivation realm (bone forging, transcendent, ect)
grade = (average, excellent, extraordinary, zenith {peak})
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Cookie Muncher - 1722208911
<HiddenHand> tryna be funny over here but forgot to add a "0"
20 = 8 year

200 = 80 ≠ 2000 credits
2000 = 800 years
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I'm back to reread the novel again

why does wang shu look like a cross between trump & napolean with ball hairs on his chin
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for sure
• how can police have time to investigate
• literally self defense
• dude was obviously just going to keep after him if spared...

Fuck this story
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I'm more thinking it was to comfort but once you get further into it you are right
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I'd have to disagree. It's not like he lacks consideration for morals but rather he considers the least despicable action for progression.
Immorality would be when someone purposely goes against the general consensus of morals ethics or practices where amoral would be when someone doesn't understand morals
A forced decision will have anyone pick a lesser evil to live (unless psycho). To say you wouldn't only means you've never been in danger 😉
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Cookie Muncher - 1722121099
I get queasy every time I read shit like this.

• Make MC OP just to...
• Drop adversary who is OP just to counter MC
- 0 to 💯
• Force BS to happen out of nowhere
- Hero dies bc a god said fuck you
- Someone who dies gets resurrected to carry out one final attack while being invincible then fades to nothingness
• characters that are unkillable because a god is clearly manipulating the world for their benefit
- chick should have died but she "luckily" rolled high.... Every time
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honestly I could already tell
1 • the god already ordered her to go to the cursed forest
2 • she showed that to be the case with paladin
3 • given the fight with saint, it seemed as if she only countered the saint vs independent action
4 • all her moves seemed to be rolls (3) and were always claimed to be "high"
5 • truly spoiler but can be easily guessed
6 • BS pisses me off. A god is legit fix his board but MC can't?
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Currently no. The facility is to "cure" diseases. The kid is already disease free, with scars left. Maybe in an "upgrade" they'll be taken care of
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