Fun fact: in the author's previous novel, the Healing Solaris Cleric, there's also a super powerful entity that also looks like a little girl and also loves to snack. She is also is treated like a little girl.

Hmm... the scans have switched. Personally, I dunno these guys.

He is massively overburdening himself. I get he's stronk beyond belief, but he's just one man. He cannot carry the weight of the world.

Is he about to start from level 1 again?
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And no, I haven't read this far in the novel. I can but for some reason, I just never do. :\\

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Fun fact: His name is "Ha Inho" which means "Servant."

Yes. We've got a Princess and her Servant.

Inb4 the goober's schemes are part of Zhou's plans.

I was hoping that he would use his light and dark powers together to create writing that almost literally jumps out at people.

At least they're applying logic to the situation. If Han wanted to sabotage and kill them all, they'd all be dead already.

Also, torture is a movie-trope that is used to push the plot along. Experts on this topic stated time and time again that "it is something that happens in movies but has no place in reality."

Hey, you probably caught me in a mood where I disagreed... but also didn't feel like saying anything. /shrug

To be clear, he did. The organization is so illogically secretive, that upon asking their souls -> he still didn't learn anything.
Like, he is so OP that if the plot didn't do this extra-secretive nonsense, this entire plot point would be over already.

So uh... art aside,
we got 4 chapters of some low-quality world building
half a chapter of explanations
and 1.5 chapters of Mr. Main Character being ridiculously OP -> but unlike Onepunch Man, he is DRIVEN.

Woah,
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I recognize this. FeelsOldMan lol

Oh they can try and most likely will. And you're right. They'll be lucky to walk away with just an arm missing.

The secret: "I am Choi."

I was curious about the premise of this. It's just a bog standard plot with a bog standard premise. There is a chance something really interesting can come of it anyway, no?

uh... nope. Nothing interesting here. Get axed. 1/10.

1 point for being anti-racism. Racism is bad.
No points for anything else. Just move along.

They have a time limit of "whenever he's done circulating energy and stabilizing himself." They need to:
1) Find the essence core
2) Decide to give it to someone
3) Argue and bicker about it for a century
4) Kill each other over it
5) Calm down and decide to do a tournament
6) Fight over it in a tournament
6.5) Sabotages in the tournament go brrrrrr
7) Finally the victor gets it
8) The victor needs to absorb it
8.5) More sabotages

There's a 99% chance Mr. Main Character will be the one to get the essence core.

Ah yes, my favorite trope: just standing there and letting the enemy do whatever they want.
Sigh. Is it so hard to handle a situation like this properly? It's a different story if someone is just delaying for time, but that ain't happening.

I didn't read the whole thing, it isn't very good. I can confirm that this is just axed. It isn't really worth picking up.

The characters are all over the place; inconsistent and stupid

Take the most blatant and dumb tropes imaginable -> and throw them into this manga for comedy purposes

Stir them in a boring obvious plot. The plot seems to be meandering with nowhere to go, so a character is like "well, no one else is gonna move the plot" -> and proceeds to go to a dungeon -> and two others follow him.
Then there is a big, bad, scary and evil monster that threatens and attacks them -> and they take no damage. No cuts, no bruises, no broken limbs, no burned skin from getting hit by fire and lightning. The monster realizes this and casts instant-death to maybe get some damage in -> then Ms. Main Character, who is constantly banging on about how "I don't wanna die!" -> takes the blow instead of another character aaaaaaaand she's fine. Nothing happens.

Soooooo yeah... no surprise it was axed. There's desperation on display to keep the manga alive, even a last ditch effort in the final chapter featuring a naked lady for literally no reason except some fan service to hopefully revive this manga.

1/10 and the 1 point is an "A for effort" for the attempt at making a unique magic idea of sorts.
Give it a pass. If you want a "I reincarnated as a villainess who is fated to die, but I refuse this role" and it is... kinda decent, then give this a read:
https://mangakatana.com/manga/how-to-survive-a-thousand-deaths-accidentally-wooing-everyone-as-an-ex-gamer-made-villainess.27249

Yeah. I didn't realize it until you said it. But hey! It's complete now. lol
I wonder if it was axed.

Ah, so... somehow, one of those mind control dudes got to this old man and literally no one knows.