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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1721450038
See ? Wouldn't have happened if it was a Yuri !

...Unless he too would be changed to be a girl, and we get plenty of love triangle and other geometrical shapes in Yuri, sooo...
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Vivaldin - 1721449648
Nooo don't remind me of the crossdressing scene !

Now all I can think about is how better this mango would be if he had been a girl that looked liked that and we'd get a delinquent girl x normal girl Yuri.
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Vivaldin - 1721449158
Our girl is an accidental lesbian magnet, but with all that ''oh, she loves me. Ah, okay. I don't feel anything.'' it's like she's asexual or aromantic, or at this point I'm starting to think she has no feelings at all.

Oh wait, what if our main girl just has dancing-autism ?
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Vivaldin - 1721448622
You know, it's a bit weird how they try to portray adult themes like nudity and sexual assault, twice now for the later too, but then they decide to censor it for some reason ? What, are they really trying that hard to keep a PG-rating on a mango about a guy who punches other guys who abuse women ?

I mean, I'm not into that non-consensual stuff anyway, but it really got me wondering, if you want to add that kind of stuff to your story, why going to such length to censor everything to the point where we can barely see what's going on ?

Even the consensual stuff was heavily censored too, I don't think the artist understand that this mango can't be both about these themes and these actions while also keep everything away from our eyes.

Not that I care that much anyway, I just find the extremely persistent censoring in the face of this story really strange and kinda funny too.
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Vivaldin - 1721359408
I cast Love-Triangle-deletus.
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Vivaldin - 1721336813
Please, I swear to the Universe,

LET MY GIRL BE HAPPY !
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Vivaldin - 1721332002
Yuri tainted by how messed up and evil our other girl is, like she makes our main girl do some real fuck up shit under blackmail that'd ruin her entire life and say ''Oh, but it's YoU wHo DiD tHiS'' every time something bad happens, which is every chapter.

It's a downward spiral of abuse and corruption, ain't really my style. Read Kimi to Tsuzuru Utakata if you want a Popular Girl x Loner Girl Yuri and don't mind the feels that is both way better written and not as toxic as this chemical waste of pages.
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Vivaldin - 1721101276
Chapter 84

In which we get to read half a chapter, just to create an unnecessary cliffhanger.
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Vivaldin - 1720714638
Chapter 83

In which Cat Lady gives up and throw herself at her cat overlord instead.
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Vivaldin - 1720714463
All the world's a Yuri.
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Vivaldin - 1720152970
This mango continues (even after what I thought would be the ending !) to be great, but it really need to start explaining itself a bit more, and way better.

You can't just add Elves with a whole new twist of the trope, being like.. Cyborg-Elves or something in a FANTASY world (or at least, more or less Fantasy, with everything Sci-Fi that happened and is still happening), without telling me what the hell's going on !

That giant space battleship, where did it come from ? And those weapons of war on it, where they invading this world ? And the Titanfall mech, what is it ? What was its original purpose ? What the hell is an code holder and why is our girl, of anyone, registered as one ? Why did that one guy had a sky aura of a giant beetle (although that reveal was rad) ? What's with people getting send into this world ? Why specifically people from our world, too ? What's the goal of throwing people who died in our world and giving them overpowered abilities ? WHO is giving them abilities ? HOW are they giving them abilities ? Could someone from this world get one of the abilities by going to the world-entrance facilities we saw in a flashback with that holographic goddess ?

WHAT was that goddess ? Is she worshipped somewhere ? Does the Church we saw worships her ? Do they know it's just an hologram/cultural imprint probably left by the people (aliens maybe ???) who created the space battleship ? Why did those battleship people (IF they're the ones who did this) want people from our world to get reincarnated here and given powers that could greatly affect this world, even REWIND TIME BEFORE DEATH ?

Are those aliens (allegedly) still around ? Did they leave ? Did they die ? Are they watching things unfold like it was some super elaborate but messed up world-wide reality television show of what happens when you give a select few super powers and tell them to do whatever they want with it ?

And most importantly, why would they want a high-ranking priestess of their religion to wear super skimpy clothes that's basically just kinky underwear ? Fan service to bolster the show's ratings with nudity so that they get more money from the Ancient Alien Reality Channel ?

Wait, is this whole mango about Ancient Aliens ? Is Giorgio A. Tsoukalos somehow writing, or involved in this ?

Is HE the one behind all of what's happening ???!
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Vivaldin - 1720151163
Why does the eating context winner get a free pass at all eating and drinking in the Gyoza Festival ? Wouldn't eating so many Gyatza make them completely full ?

Are the festival's organizers stupid ?
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Vivaldin - 1720150846
This chapter was Based and Breadpilled.

I love bread, I freakin' LOOOOVE BREAD ! Bread is the best ! Bread goes with everything ! Bread can BE anything ! There's so many kinds of bread, many I have never eaten, I wish I could eat panini like them because BREAD IS AWESOME !

I have spoken.
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Vivaldin - 1719977612
Yes way !!

Super duper ultra mega uber YESS WAY !!!
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Vivaldin - 1719977422
Man, this is great. One of THE best poly relationship portrayal in a mango I've ever seen, all three of them are Best Girls in their own right, with their own ambitions, goals and chapters, as well as reason to like our boy. It's thoughtful, it's loving, it's perfect.

And it comes from porn, of all things.
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Vivaldin - 1719977034
After months, we finally get a real, full chapter, nice.

Also, isn't that just... postponing the current problem to much later ? Giving her the will to continue to fight for her love is just a temporary solution; unless they all end up in some polygamous relationship, one of those girls will loose against the other, what shall he do then ?
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Vivaldin - 1718943221
What could she even do if she does not become a witch anyway ?

She still have her powers without the ritual too, so isn't it just a formality ? Or maybe it unlocks her true potential, I don't know.

Also there's so many chapters of this releasing every day these days, took me a while to catch up.
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Vivaldin - 1718942583
...And my side ship is over before it even start.

Another month just passed too, and now they'll be third years.

I remember my last year, I took it easy, but I guess I wasn't in Japan, where your final year is absolute suffering to please your future school.
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Vivaldin - 1718942093
Weren't we in New year ? doesn't that mean that a month and a half passed straight up, just like that ?

Nevertheless, I am deeply happy that my side ship is materializing.

You go girl, get your Prince of Darkness !
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