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Vivaldin
1497 points
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Vivaldin - 1727722305
Huh, the... What did I call her again ? The big creature that turned into a girl, she's still alive.

Also, a FOUR YEAR time skip ? I mean, okay... And she built a freakin' Mafia ?! Well, you go girl, make them an offer they can't refuse !

And did anyone noticed how the ''demons'' look so Human ? What if they are former Humans, corrupted by a power or curse so ancient they themselves have forgotten their origins ?

Like, are they actually affected by some Alien spaceship's malfunctioning engine leaking radiation straight into their land ! That could be a cool detail.
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Vivaldin - 1727721711
Oh no, she's a horse girl, just like my 6 cousins.

The Horse Girl Curse is spreading, we have to kill the Flicka Hive Mind before it control the entire world !
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Vivaldin - 1727669531
It's been so long, but I really felt like this was half a chapter.

How long will we have to wait to get the rest ? I have no idea, but I hope it's sooner than later.
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Vivaldin - 1727668788
2 months of waiting, and Best Girl isn't even in the chapter ? Oh well.

Study Girl looks like a lot of problems, for our couple I mean; she isn't all that bad, but I ain't here for her, I got enough nervous girlfailure mangos as it is !

Where was our girl at during this whole chapter anyway ?
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Vivaldin - 1727668085
It's Jelly Hours.

The only cure is pizza buns.
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Vivaldin - 1727552135
I'm breeding the Mother of all Milfs, Jack !

Can't fret over every daughter !
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Vivaldin - 1727382125
Our girl's gonna stab the next woman that DARE approach him with those finger blades.
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Vivaldin - 1727212800
Two months of wait, just to get to read ''See you next chapter !'' ?????

At this point, they have more romance development in the non-canon arts at the end !
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Vivaldin - 1727151111
She has the Booberinaroos.

The Badonkadonkers, even.
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Vivaldin - 1727150673
He misses more shots than when I use my Direct Hit.
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Vivaldin - 1727066520
Slightly toxic Fdom x msub who is already in love with his childhood friend but then surprisingly (or rather unsurprisingly) develops feelings for the Main Girl too, over time.

It's... Kinda good, from the few chapters I sampled ? ...If you forget how she sexually assaulted him on Chapter 4, the dynamic is nice but still, you can't help but feel something is wrong with her, and I'm not sure yet if that makes me see her as evil or hot... Maybe it's both, actually.
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Vivaldin - 1727065781
Nah man, the sexual violence tag is well-deserved.

This girl just assaulted him despite him telling her to stop, that's fucked up, bro.
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Vivaldin - 1726952447
It's really good and funny, but the ending has no conclusion or ANYTHING; it's like just another chapter.

I really liked reading this, but come on ! Why end something this good on such a non-satisfying way ?
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Vivaldin - 1726952301
No real ending ? No satisfiying conclusion ? No confession ? JUST some slight (theoretical) Yuri ?!

https://i.postimg.cc/FRk65n7j/i.gif
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Vivaldin - 1726867040
I know it's not completed yet, but I'm doing my review after 12 chapters early since I can't take much more of this.

This is a series of different oneshots, all in different worlds, with nothing (except a weird-ass ''God'', who is only there some chapters) connecting them. It's not always Fantasy, there's a Virtual Reality one on Chapter 8, a particularly weird one of the bunch, but therein lies a problem:

It just got one joke, a single joke, all chapter, all mango, we've got underage teenage girls, we're gonna strip 'em of their clothes one way or another, do not expect it to make sense, do not expect anything else to come out of this but this singular joke and A LOT of consensual and (far too many times) non-consensual exhibitionism.

I guess it's kinda funny in a way, some times. But... Eh, it's definitely not taking itself seriously at all or trying to do something interesting with its premise.
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