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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1726952301
No real ending ? No satisfiying conclusion ? No confession ? JUST some slight (theoretical) Yuri ?!

https://i.postimg.cc/FRk65n7j/i.gif
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Vivaldin - 1726867040
I know it's not completed yet, but I'm doing my review after 12 chapters early since I can't take much more of this.

This is a series of different oneshots, all in different worlds, with nothing (except a weird-ass ''God'', who is only there some chapters) connecting them. It's not always Fantasy, there's a Virtual Reality one on Chapter 8, a particularly weird one of the bunch, but therein lies a problem:

It just got one joke, a single joke, all chapter, all mango, we've got underage teenage girls, we're gonna strip 'em of their clothes one way or another, do not expect it to make sense, do not expect anything else to come out of this but this singular joke and A LOT of consensual and (far too many times) non-consensual exhibitionism.

I guess it's kinda funny in a way, some times. But... Eh, it's definitely not taking itself seriously at all or trying to do something interesting with its premise.
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Vivaldin - 1726866755
Man, look how they massacred my favourite trope of Knight Girls !
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Vivaldin - 1726866511
Bro got beheaded at least 50-100 times, WILLINGLY, just to see someone naked.

I don't know if I should be amazed by the dedication, or terrified someone would go through such pain for such a vain, selfish goal.
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Vivaldin - 1726866222
Okay this one was good, IF THEY DROPPED THE WHOLE UNIMPORTANT CLOTHE REMOVAL THEY DO every SINGLE chapter.
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Vivaldin - 1726865906
One Joke,

I don't know why,

I'm reading a mango wih only one joke to try,

Keep that in mind that they designed this comic to be about adolescent girls in other worlds going through puberty,

and that's all I know.

Time is a valuable thing, watch it fly by as I continue reading this thing.

Watch the productive hours countdown to the end of the day, the clock tick like the waves of clothes removed, it's so unreal.

Didn't look how much time I wasted below, watch all that productive time thrown out of the window, trying to hold on but I didn't even know I wasted it all just to read a weird underage exhib mangoooooooooooo

I kept believing it might turn good if I stay inside, and even though I tried (to like this), it all fell apart, whatever good this could be will eventually be a memory of a time I


TRIED SO HARD, TO LIKE THIS MANGO,

BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER.

I HAD TO READ ALL THIS, AND LOOSE IT ALL (my valuable, finite time),

BUT IN THE END, IT JUST GOT ONE (1) JOOOOOKEEEE !
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Vivaldin - 1726864947
....Wouldn't that mean that in some incomprehensible, esoteric way, they're all reincarnating into the world of the Hot Springs chapter, and that for some reason, it is both the world from the book of said chapter, and a Virtual Reality game ?
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Vivaldin - 1726864774
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand we're back to the weird exhibitionism trope of this mango.

I don't know what I'm doing here since I don't really like it, this IS what this mango is about.
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Vivaldin - 1726863898
....

...Just tell them you need to go to the toilet ?
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Vivaldin - 1726863777
That was... Actually a good story. I'd kinda read this if it was a series, maybe.

And there was only one (1) sexual harassment joke ! Well, 2 if you count the windy skirts caused by... The bird's roar ?
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Vivaldin - 1726863500
I don't understand, I don't see any clothes on her ! No, it can't be...

That would mean, I'm a fool too ? IMPOSSIBLE !
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Vivaldin - 1726863254
This mango be hella wack, yo.
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Vivaldin - 1726785600
If you remove the...... Really weird, constant sexual harassment, the premise of a group of people all reincarnated into another world to play the roles of some of its characters who are all born in different places in society, with them realizing they're all in a story they were reading and then trying to, I don't know, make a better ending of a flawed world or simply navigating their new lives inside a Fantasy world void of technology and modernity, all the while keeping their secret of being reincarnated away from the people of this world, sounds really cool.

Such a shame it's been wasted on an oneshot chapter from a mango's whose sole joke is ''sexual harassment of teenage girls is mad funny''.
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Vivaldin - 1726780601
And this is why we should attack and dethrone God(s?), TAKE OUR RIGHTFUL PLACE AS DIVINE BEINGS !

God did not break the Tower of Babel to confuse us, he broke it because he was SCARED OF THE UNDYING WILL OF HUMANITY !

Break your chains ! Disavow the divine orders ! Today we shall slay Gods by the hundreds, today WE ascend to Heaven !
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Vivaldin - 1726780286
Wha-

What the hell is this chapter, what's going oooooooonnnnn
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Vivaldin - 1726250719
Finally, the age-old question is answered;

What if Sherlock Holmes was as Japanese girl, who used his talents of logic and reasoning for the sole purpose of turning her twink classmate into a msub ?
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Vivaldin - 1726010594
I'm not reading it, just stumbled on this while browsing and had to say my piece:

Japanese writers REALLY need to stop doing these weird titles that are just overtly long for nothing. It's like, just take the first part ? Why do they have to add an entire paragraph of cringe after it ? Why can't Japanese writers write better, shorter titles ? (Do they belong in an asylum ? Are they stupid ?)

Yeah i could call my super duper cool new mango ''Tales of the Lone Ranger'', but have you considered the much better title ''Tales of the (epic and cool) Lone Ranger, bringer of gold, Shoot ! Shoot ! Shoot your gun in the west, very far away to get revenge ! ~I hate revenge, but I cannot stand injustice !''
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