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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1707344155
???

This chapter was so weird, it felt like a amalgamation of different scenes with no connections whatsoever.

Where are they going with this, I wonder.
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Vivaldin Irem - 1707283135
Man, if you really don't like assertive girls that much I don't understand why you started reading this in the first place; it's on the cover, tittle and description !

And this time, of all chapters, it could be the only time she's not actively trying to seduce him, since you know, there's a pervert on the loose and it seems like they're there trying to watch her. She could merely be trying to seek protection with someone else, you know, a normal move anyone who do when attacked.

...Although there's also a pretty good chance the joke is that it's like a cat or something doing the noise.
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Vivaldin - 1707282813
What the hell is that outfit, do women just wear underwear when they're alone ?

Not like I'll ever know, heh.

Anyway, really ? We're cutting the chapter there of all places ? Do I have to wait another 4 months to see what will happen ?
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Vivaldin - 1707282256
Man, she vibe checked him so hard, he asked her on a date.

He's so dense that we need to make progress at gunpoint now.
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Vivaldin - 1707281880
The Gyoza Female mindset, rule 69:

When a little sister ask you what you like about her brother, your subby boi,

Just tell 'em ''Plenty of things'', keep her guessing, let her figure out the answers of her own questions.

Then simply hug the child until she falls asleep to assert dominance and respect. Become her older sister to show how well you are at dominating him.
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Vivaldin - 1707281430
No freakin' way, he's alive ????

I'm next to almost sure he's the clone from the Zoo incident, I don't think Yellow Keeper would make a mistake by not disposing completely the last one, since he knows too much.

Then again, even if it's the Zoo one that my boi D stabbed, why didn't they make sure he was dead before making another one.

And he doesn't remember who he is ! That means there's still a possibility he could remember, which will most likely happen, and I'm really looking forward to that, he knows who D uses as his spy disguise ! I can't wait to see what comes next in Peak, the mango !

Also, who is that glasses girl ? Is she new ? I don't remember they had a character that immigrated from the SlayQueendom.
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Vivaldin - 1707158146
Chapter 28

Gf wakes up and nothing happens.

Yet.
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Vivaldin - 1706848368
OH NO, she's too adorable !

Also, the first outfit was great, I don't know what's really wrong with it.

All it's missing is a baguette bread.
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Vivaldin - 1706848005
And so ends the longest arc of this mango (so far).

I really thought this would be the end of it after such an epic climatic battle, but it's still going on ? Not complaining, just wondering where the story will go now.

To think I was wrong, Japanese Homelander ain't the final boss, he ain't even the true leader of the Rangers ! He's just a pawn for Yellow guy and his plan to... Probably do something !

My ass was hella scared that Muscle Bro would get killed to show that Ranger boi got turned into a bad guy, but I'm okay with the loss of TV Guy, he has done his part to the story. Still, RIP.

Wait, but doesn't that mean the new (potentially) ''Evil'' guys includes my Muscle Bro ?! I guess we'll see...
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Vivaldin - 1706846968
Huh, this is back.

Also, I'd like one of these clay dolls, that'd be cool.
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Vivaldin - 1706470351
Love WINS.
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Vivaldin - 1706290039
I don't know, man. Getting it on with your girl and her mom seems kinda awkward to me.
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Vivaldin - 1706244129
Head full of gay gf thoughts.
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Vivaldin - 1706243873
She's trying so hard, isn't that so endearing ?

I didn't know she got such good tastes, good for her. Impressive, really !
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Vivaldin - 1705983733
Now that it's over, it's time for a proper review.

This, in my humble opinion is one of the best written Yuri mango on this site, and more importantly, one that also reached its conclusion in a natural way instead of being rushed.

It's deeply psychological, trying really hard to make you care about its character and succeeded to do so, at least for me. It's also filled with flawed people all with their own pains, and this leads me to my next point;

It's a great mango, one a wholeheartedly recommend, but at the same time, don't read this expecting it to be a cute fluffy Yuri, it's very well a Tragedy tag type mango, a tag that we early readers didn't know was there until the site hit us with it, so prepare to get gut-punched in the feels so hard you'll read The Sheep Princess in Wolf's Clothing again.

All in all, This get the Official Vivaldin Recommendation Seal, though you should prepare to be depressed if you venture forth.
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Vivaldin - 1705983040
Alright, it's not the ending I wanted, certainly not the ending my writer girl deserved, but also not a bad ending.

I'm... Hella depressed now because of this, but I'm slightly happy she got to at least live on and hope she's be happy one day too.

Though I wished for a miracle but got the cold reality instead, I did thoroughly enjoy this mango.
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Vivaldin - 1705982213
Oh well, gotta wait 'til somewhere next one to get a semblance of an answer !

See you later !
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Vivaldin - 1705981683
He got dom'ed so hard he turned into a Shoujo Mango heroine.
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