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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1710127134
My favourite failgirl is still at it, I see.
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Vivaldin - 1709698122
Now THIS,

This is perfection, I like this.
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Vivaldin - 1709697957
Can't they just.. Call the police on those two weird pervy guys ? I mean sure, one of them didn't do anything yet, but the other, sadge boi DID try to assault her, but they just.. Didn't report him ?
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Vivaldin - 1709697481
Chapter 21

In which the main hetero couple blooms into Yuri.
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Vivaldin Wayway - 1709059546
That's some freakin' weirdly specific criteria.

What, did a tall girl bite you when you were a child ?
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Vivaldin - 1708879265
27 is old ?

Man, that's not helping my 23 existential crisis.
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Vivaldin - 1708404306
Is my boi okay ? He's hiding inside the kotatsu with the heater on, wouldn't it be too hot for him ?

I don't think whatever he's doing down there is worth the face tan.
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Vivaldin - 1708404063
Man slept with his uncomfortable pointy pine-tree hat.

Now that takes dedication to the Holidays spirit.

Or maybe he's just dumb.
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Vivaldin - 1708403889
He doesn't need an exorcist.

He needs therapist.
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Vivaldin - 1708403688
Esper girl on the SECOND chapter ?

Our boi is now speedrunning the pre-serialization.
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Vivaldin - 1708403216
We really doing this ? In the first chapter, even ?

My man cannot be contained.
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Vivaldin - 1708379290
Filming a movie might seems fun, but it's a very difficult thing to do, I don't know how they'd manage to keep the whole class together to make something like that, but power of the mango class friendship, I guess...

Also, I'm kinda amused that the author managed to find our boi's slight characterization inside the black hole that is his personality, I'd like to see where they'll take that in the story, is he gonna turn into the assertive childhood friend gf's cameraman ? That would be interesting.
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Vivaldin AlexBen - 1708378877
I think the problem is that they're all freakin' tropes with nothing more added; dense boi is the self-insert protagonist with the relatable personality of having none so you can project yourself on him easily, loner girl is the shy girl that secretly love the main character, glasses girl is the mysterious woman from the past, his little sister is the ''I am so good at housekeeping, I am such a good wife, wow !'' with an added incest subtext as a joke, and the assertive childhood friend is the unattainable flower beyond his reach.

All of them (except the main girl), by virtue of being side character he can talk to, have been somewhat expanded upon, may it be their reasons for loving him, or simply a glimpse into their personalities, but the childhood friend has constantly been placed in the background ever since the author added more characters to the mix, hence why the only thing we really know about her is ''I want to be an actress !'' because she says it now in every chapter since that detail was added (which hasn't been so long story-wise, but for us felt like forever 'cause of the wait between chapters).

Personally I prefer her over the others, mostly because none of the others (once again, personally) interest me in this story's context (they could find someone SO MUCH better than him) and I think they dilute the original story, but I could see each of them in a better mango, where they'd get the true spotlight, the detailed characterization and love they deserve.
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Vivaldin - 1708377850
Freakin' finally.

Only took 45+ chapters for him to realize that
https://i.postimg.cc/vZxqXgxF/i.png
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Vivaldin - 1708377502
Love is realizing you like someone, a lot.

With this dense idiot, however, love will not happens.
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Vivaldin - 1708373965
''What are we going to do ?''

''Something good will happen !'' then proceeds to cut his own bride open and cause nuclear annihilation of an entire country he wanted to rule.

Moving on, this only make their reunion and what they told each other HELLA FREAKIN' WEIRD, like, ''Yo girl, remember me from like 400+ years ago ? I was your boyfriend that cut your stomach with my boys so that I'd get all of your magic power and rule the kingdom instead of you ? Haha, I build you a new magic kingdom, wanna be my Queen ?''

And for some, (still unknown) reason she was like ''Wow, that's so sweet of you, I love you ! Yay !'' ???????????????

Don't get me started on the original plan ! Even if that succeeded and he became Wizard-King or whatever, what would he have done with her ? Apologize from taking all her magical power, lying to her and cutting her stomach open for a horrifyingly painful ritual ?

I don't suppose Wizard King Guy had time to go to therapy during all those years without her ?
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Vivaldin - 1708372699
His Maid gf, obviously.
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Vivaldin - 1708372479
Ranger boi went through so much trauma, from his past and his current life, even got disfigured forever and lost his sister, the last remaining member of his family.

It was only a matter of time until he became the Joker.

And now we'll finally (maybe) find out where baby Invaders come from !
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