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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1708023282
It says I have a bookmark on this chapter, but I have absolutely no recollection of this mango ever existing.

I guess that's what happens when 4 years pass without a single update, oh well.

Gotta read this all over again to see if it's actually good now, hoping that if it is, it won't take another American election to get another chapter.
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Vivaldin - 1707716476
...You know what ?

I'm starting to think that, what if, maybe a stretch but.. Could he actually have autism ?

He has no social awareness, he can't understand emotions like love, he's completely dense, his only ideas about what love is are tropes seen constantly in fiction... The only thing he'd need now is an full-on obsession, but he's too self-insert to have that, I guess.

Also this chapter is a near-replica of the last one with boring girl, at least for what it's about and the girl reaction. Nothing to do with autism except repetition, yes, but I kinda wanted to share that too.
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Vivaldin - 1707716024
Damn, I never liked boring girl, but that chapter was just cruel. Even if he's such a dense idiot, someone with common sense wouldn't simply do something as heartless as this, what the hell.
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Vivaldin - 1707715793
Nevermind, I forgot he's the densest, most braindead idiot ever conceive by Humanity's entire repertoire of literature.

Chalk it up as a prank ??? Is he for real ?! And he still doesn't know if it was serious ?! And then THEY ACT AS IF NOTHING EVEN HAPPENED AFTERWARDS ? WHAT ?!

Y-you can just make them kiss and NOT do something about it ! What is this ? WHY am I reading this ?!
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Vivaldin - 1707715377
Wha-

Ooookay, I am extremely pleasantly surprised by this development, didn't think we'd EVER get this far, at least not in the next 50+ chapters, but damn ! Good for her, good for her !

Now I freakin' hope with my entire being that this time he doesn't go his usual ''HUH ? SHE KisSeD ME ????!!!! That must mean she thinks of me as a really good friend !!!'' Or I swear I'm going to burn the publishing house to the ground.
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Vivaldin - 1707714843
Man, I forgot this existed, for a very long time.

What a blissful existence I must have lived, 'cause these dummies keep beating around the bush ! ''I'm mad you dated someone without telling me !'' ''I want to be your first kiss !'' and he's STILL don't understand she's in love with him ?

And boring girl ought to understand she's out of the picture already, he rejected you a while ago ! Don't think that'll change anytime soon, her best bet would be to move on and find someone else so she can stop constantly ruining every moment he has with the superior assertive childhood friend gf.

Also, as previously mentioned on last chapter; I called the bait on them totally not kissing during that scene. This mango is as predictable as it is painful to read.
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Vivaldin - 1707714028
''What was that ?''

I don't know, kid, even the artist didn't know what to draw, it's like all the frames are unconnected.

Also, why are THEY there ? I thought they didn't know this guy survived, but just one chapter later and they already do ???
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Vivaldin - 1707713078
Forget my comment of last chapter.

She came back with chocolate, not milk.
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Vivaldin - 1707712967
3 years later, Robot Mom came back from the convenience store with the milk, as foretold in the Elder Scrolls.

Also, ''P pattern from the CCP ?''

...The P pattern from the Chinese Communist Party ?
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Vivaldin - 1707454403
Oh cool, their wyvern child can genuinely understand them. I wonder if it's because of it being a wyvern, 'cause if not, maybe they could reason with the Monster Horse.

Very nice to see that our girl is actually doing something to help, I like that. They're truly making our couple as equals that can rely on each other, not many other mangos do that.

Now only problem is, I need to wait for the next part, ugh.
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Vivaldin - 1707454035
Oh, that's a BIG wyvern child, didn't expect it to be this mature. I thought we'd get a lil' tiny baby.

Also, the guy can just casually turn into a giant ? You mean this guy isn't important to the military that they'd let him go all the way over there ?

Just strap some armor and siege equipment on that big boi and I'd conquer the world.
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Vivaldin - 1707453473
I've been busy with so many things the days, it seems 3 months have past since they released this chapter.

Good for me, there's two more to read ! Yay.

I'll be looking forward to their smol wyvern child.
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Vivaldin - 1707423802
GET DOWN MISS PRESIDENT !

Man, that reminds me of my own times in school getting hit in the face by a soccer ball, and that other time with a basketball, not memories I'd like to remember, mind you.

Personally, I would have tried to block it with my chest instead; less chance to get a headshot if you angle yourself away from it, but I guess he didn't have time to think about where it'll hit, too focused on saving her.

And for that, he's a very good boi.
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Vivaldin - 1707423281
At this point, though it's pretty funny, I don't really understand why he doesn't simply tell his mom that they're all in a polycule, what's the worse that can happen ? Even if he gets thrown out of the family, the rich girl is already covering everyone's expenses !

Is it just because of that one time where his mom was there and thought Rich girl was his girlfriend ? They just don't want to tell her ''woops, we lied under pressure !'' ? But then they're just digging a bigger hole for themselves.
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Vivaldin - 1707422419
Maaan, this author really need to stop Yuri baiting me in both the cover and the actual story, I'm having a hard time not shipping those two girls together !

Like, I know this is about how this boi's and our girl fall in love and learn how appearances aren't everything, but thinking about it, if it was just her and Snake-eyed girl, I'd be totally on board with that.

Like, a Yuri about the popular but secretly bitter girl who slowly falls in love with the kind girl who at first she only wanted to be friend with to use her popularity with boys, but then realize as she continues to hang out with her that her whole mentality is wrong and selfish, that she'll never be happy even if she reached her goal of being ''the most popular girl in school'' or something.

...Or would it be too cliche ? Probably has been done a few times before, but can't remember.
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Vivaldin - 1707421668
Wow, being a girl sounds scary.

Anyway, that was a very good chapter, this mango continues to be a breath of fresh air to surpass all that generic romcom we're being flooded with these past years, I really like it.

I wasn't too sure that focusing on the Snake-Eyed girl's thoughts would be a good idea since her whole deal up 'til now seemed to be the ''mysterious girl from the past whose mind and actions are indecipherable'', but I was pleasantly surprised where they took her character with this chapter. 'Makes you feel about how or society's obsession with beauty and popularity can warp our brains into doing the most cruellest of things to others.
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Vivaldin - 1707420853
Yaay, now she's get more friends !

Probably...
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