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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1714079504
Who ?

Also, it's nice to finally get her side of the start of the story; who could have known that our manic assertive gay dream girl was actually just a nervous wreck desperately trying to make friends and find love.

She just like me for real (except I'm not gay and a girl, I think ?).
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Vivaldin - 1714078542
''I wonder what your organs look like...''

That is... Certainly a thing someone sane would say to their queen, or anyone for that matter.

Also, Wizard King, more like Wizard Grandpa; he got amnesia about his accidental genocide ! He doesn't remember he cut her open ?!

I think he needs a big nap.
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Vivaldin - 1714077950
Man, she's good. A woman like that could fully cure a depression.

Also, a scar ? We going the sad backstory route with this one ? Okay, at least we'll learn something, anything about her for once, maybe.
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Vivaldin - 1713986458
A really cute chapter,

Of a mango I COMPLETELY forgot existed or was in my bookmarks, but I'm not complaining, it's a good one !
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Vivaldin - 1713986144
Not the best Yuri I've read, and nothing really ''Yuri'' happens in it, but it was a okay read, I guess.
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Vivaldin - 1713986109
The ending was better, and I guess her knowing the dad did make me laugh.

It's not the best, but it was okay.
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Vivaldin - 1713985886
Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....

I was um, expecting something a bit better, coming from the same person who made Itoshi Koishi, but... Yeah, I'm gonna finish this, but it's not that very good...


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Vivaldin - 1713985407
Chapter 81

In which nothing happens.
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Vivaldin - 1713587691
This mango is so PEAK, let's go !

Still, the whole thing got me wondering, if it's truly just an island somewhere close to Japan, doesn't that mean they have foreign relations with the mainland and/or other countries ? Does the power of the star work on long-term visitors or just the people there ?

And why does our girl have a stinger on her butt ? Did the star alter her grandmother's DNA as well as her future descendants ? What's the purpose doing this to her ? Securing a husband forever ?
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Vivaldin - 1713587001
Man, I wish I could be as productive a writer than that... Wait, isn't she like 10 or 12 years old ?

Why is that little girl writing erotic smut again ?
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Vivaldin - 1713411900
Cute.

Alos, this mango takes a break for like 8 months and then come back with 12 MORE chapters AND the freakin' ending.

I mean, sure I like it and wanted to read more, but not like this !
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Vivaldin - 1713411272
Oh so they're were first years all this time, I kinda forgot; though they were second years, like... Every other mango ever.

Easier to get your graduation scene that way.

Also, thinking about that box... I don't even know what I would have written on a paper... Uuuuuuuh... I guess the desks were comfortable ? No, that can't be right... The book we were forced to read recommended were good ? HAHA no.

Oh, our teachers barely gave us any homework ! Now that must be my favourite thing of my last high school's year's class !
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Vivaldin - 1713410772
Oh my gosh, they did it. They both did it.

I thought at least one of those side-ships would sink into a disaster, but they're fine ! Better than fine ! She got her teacher gf ! My smol girl made her friend blush ! WE IN BOYS/or girls/ or nonbinary/or whichever alien is reading this.
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Vivaldin - 1713301493
Oh my freakin' esoteric Japanese God(s) !

Is that a motherfukin' PeRsONa 5 RoYaL ReFeRenCe ????!?!?!?!?!
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Vivaldin - 1713299757
Smol girl doesn't love main girl, she loves her own idealization of who main girl is and that's why she'll never get her; the person she loves doesn't exist.

Also, great ! Dramatic double unrequited love Yuri !

https://i.postimg.cc/ZR447Nzb/i.jpg
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Vivaldin - 1713298804
Man, everything in this chapter up to the dance was hella embarrassing.

And that other smol girl really needs to understand main girl gonna end up with the better girl in a suit. Wake up smol girl ! You're doing nothing and losing dance points by the second while everyone's watching !

Also, it feels weird when a character goes ''who could ever love someone like me'' when we ALREADY HAVE A LOVE TRIANGLE.

Kinda take you out of the feeling she's trying to express when there's many people going for her, is what I'm saying.
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Vivaldin - 1713298036
Couple propaganda.

The couple propaganda is WORKING.
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Vivaldin - 1713297851
She's talking like having their daughter stopped that good time.

But we know from experience reading this that's absolutely a lie.
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Vivaldin - 1713297708
April 1

The ''Vibe-checking your daughter'' day.
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Vivaldin - 1713224745
Bro double friendship-started her in a matter of seconds.

Maybe the Chad of the future was inside him all along.
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