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Respectful Boba Lover
388 points
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The synopsis reminded me of the father son riddles lol. Good world building, sufficient pacing. Acceptable slowburn romance.
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3/5 it's not so bad, but it's lacking in almost all aspects. I liked the villain, and the first parts were interesting. The romance was enjoyable. The main plot's climax dragged for some time which sucks, so I just lost interest in the ending as well. Overall, the story is kinda inconsistent in quality because there are many filler conversations. The world-building was alright. The main characters were kinda cliched without any more going on with them outside their love story. The FL didn't show impressive character development, but that could be because the climax was dragged. I don't recommend. I'd rather reread other series than reading this.
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I don't really recommend, but you can also give it a chance.

The introduction setup was messy. Info dump, messy flow, cliched humor showing characters to be tropey, and messy character introductions. The flow only became decent by Chapter 8 when the ML's story was told. It was good, and I loved it (the bar might be low).

However, both seasons 1 and 2 were still messy. The season 1 was filled with whatever events without any kind of setup. It's just the main characters encountering whatever irrelevant problem right off the bat that gets resolved in only a few chapters, making the story come off rash and jumpy with some romance in between. I'm calling them irrelevant because the main plot hardly progressed with them, much like having problems given needless attention. The world building lacked depth because of this crucial flaw. It didn't improve that much in season 2, and I can't even remember what distinguishes each other but the progress in the relationship between the MCs.

I really loved the ML, and I wanted to give this story a chance, so I kept reading. I also loved the romance, and I loved the art, but I think this manhwa hardly deserves a 7/10. It was enjoyable, but it wasn't much of what I was expecting. I even chose to forget that it's Josei because the events are usually indistinct from shoujo fantasy tropes.

I also loved the FL. Both the FL and ML are complex and quirky, but the FL fell victim to lackluster story writing. She had so much potential, but she can easily get dismissed by her in denial that's a prevalent disease in isekai stories. I just really hope they grow with creative story writing. The other characters were okay, but I can hardly care about them tbh. They're mostly just there existing, and so far, it's just our main couple trying to save the world.
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That revenge was nice and simple.
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Yeah kid call em out and execute the count's family for us
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Well at least he had a really good backstory. Desiring to be of help to someone even when you have nothing does make a person think they did something in their live, and that would make them content or happy. Can't drop this now
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The events in this chapter are quite annoying and nonsense.... Ugh... Why tf did they just meet like that
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At least shes getting better treatment there than at her house
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With the power of friendship love. Love the art though. But why the hell would they even accept their father for cheating on their mother
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Guns, huh. The setup was so predictable
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Yeah we need that biological father for the child
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boring first chapter, what a waste
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Lmao the artist was different. And the artist changed a lot of the drama with the uncle too.
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