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That's what makes it interesting.
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User-0000000069 - 1704626410
What a foresight...
Just dodge and escape with it
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User-0000000069 - 1704436150
Jan 2024 review,

It started great,
But the author ran out of ideas and content fast.

Some revenge and reasoning become more and more forced and awkward if the reader takes some moment to think about it logically.

For the plot convenience (At later chapters):
1. MC suddenly did something never foreshadowed at reveal moments.
2. Sub-Character personality becomes inconsistent and degraded when it is time for the MC's revenge.
3. The author had some contradictions to what he wrote chapters ago (Plotholes).
4. All ugly events, MC just know about it, many never foreshadowed or hinted. It just suddenly there when MC is bashing the revenge target.
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Nah, it's just plot convenience for the author at this point.
The author is out of ideas, so he starts giving random reasons for MC's revenge.

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User-0000000069 - 1704375995
If the goblins were this pesky, attacking and raiding every now and then,
I'm surprised they are not treated as high threat by the adventurer guilds nor by the army.
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User-0000000069 Arnish - 1704375318
You can learn to be happy at all NTR scene :D
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I agree on that,

But it's more realistic that Usher died though, else, the stage would be too easy.
And the fact team 2 and team 3 are facing soldiers 5 times their size.

Now the problem is how the Author treat MC, Jenna, and Aaron.
I hope the author is not being overprotective of these 3.
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User-0000000069 - 1704349963
Why do they need to burn the dildo?
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User-0000000069 - 1704349217
https://i.postimg.cc/4y7czDBW/i.jpg
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User-0000000069 - 1704348836
If those many ships disappear per year, just due to this island, officials would have seriously checked on it.

See that containers of goods, those must be millions of USD (Excluding the ship), and that's just 1 ship victim.
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It's fast enough.
This arc will probably end in 6~7 chapter.
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User-0000000069 - 1704277228
She found her dream job so early in life.
I'm jealous.
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User-0000000069 - 1704276551
Where is the gore?
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User-0000000069 - 1704272452
I don't understand, how did they resolved the whole thing?
Everything just go, yeah ok....

If the gramp's grandson came, he would have died in this world.
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User-0000000069 - 1704262575
If MC is reverse-gendered, would he be called a thot?
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User-0000000069 - 1704255499
Wish there are more of these bizare stuff
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