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But then again, if you remember, our MC picked the sword lying on the ground in the middle of nowhere.
Probably some outskirts of a town, seeing how random passersby roam around to spot our MC with the sword.

I mean, the sword situation is already suspicious from the very beginning.
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must be the mandela effect
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Just give it to them,
Some of us can gain enlightenment from those
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User-0000000069 - 1702345977
It would take 1000 seconds to deplete 10% of HP.
That S+ gear skill sucks.
Need something else to boost it.
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Now that I read till CH.7

I was hoping for more tragedy and blood, but only the 1st chapter has it.
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https://i.postimg.cc/DyRXx9kC/i.jpg
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User-0000000069 - 1702281476
Just the start of the story there are already many inconsistencies and plotholes:
1. Our MC supposed to be an average adventurer that had never seen artifacts, the next day, with just tiny wee bit of powerup, he soloed a MUTATED dungeon like it was his everyday thing, and collected an artifact just like that.
2. A random Dwarf, out of nowhere, sold him a weapon that can solo Bosses.
3. The prince villain makes stupid decisions, and the military forces have a hard time clearing dungeons despite weapon shops selling powerful weapons.
4. Just average loot (leathers, teeth) of so-so monster give him enough money to buy powerful gears and items. The economy is broken.
5. Other people have the sight range of unmodded Skyrim's guard.

Seeing how it got over 100 chapters, I think it became good later on.
But the immersion was lost in the first few chapters, leaving me no willpower to continue reading.

If you don't care about the details, probably can be a good read.
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That much is not much of a dissapointment. Doubt.
U have to tell the real dissapointment
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User-0000000069 - 1702260743
I think the author shota/gay fetish really start to leak within the last 30 chapters.
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User-0000000069 - 1702191460
JP people are rude with the namings
That's not pet you know
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User-0000000069 Arnish - 1702169005
https://i.postimg.cc/qqfL8j2z/i.jpg
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User-0000000069 - 1702129959
Wow MC's dad is retard to choose this Jin Rou thing,
MC's mom also shares the blame.

Even in character design this Jin rou thing is not much.
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https://i.postimg.cc/kX994B6s/i.jpg
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User-0000000069 - 1702089306
Spoiler:
That was part of the soul Xiao Chu sealed in her previous life.
In her previous life, she was rejected by MC, feeling deeply hurt, she sealed part of her soul + feelings towards MC there.
When the feeling of affection towards the ML was sealed, what left was rivalry. (Which cause her to fought ML over treasures & opportunities)

This actually save her in the current life, as it means that she has reserved power that can be obtained back when it is unsealed.
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https://i.postimg.cc/RZbchRjc/i.jpg
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User-0000000069 - 1702031128
Well, she was thinking of how she is kissing a disgusting Clam. Not the person inside.
She is not aware of the clam backstory.

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User-0000000069 - 1702021677
isn't that du sha too old to be in the disciple recruitment?
She is definitely 14~16
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