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Review:
It's cute,
But the author's mindset is too pink and fluffy, that it is a mismatch for her to write this cultivation story (+ Demonic Sect story).

What went wrong:
Demonic Sect that pampers the MC a lots.
Pink-hearted demonic sect elders, no rivalry, only friendship and talking about cute stuff.
Flirting in the middle of a fight
Chatty small villain
Flirting in the middle of a run.
Enemies doing nothing when telegraphed attacks are coming.
Assassins dropping their guard around their targets
Main Hero magically came out of nowhere to save the damsel in distress.
MC is slow-minded, and minds work like tangled spaghetti (This is not OK in Demonic Sect cultivation genre).
Pedo Main Hero, fell in love with MC when she is 2 years old.

Verdict:
The author should have removed the villain or demonic sect from her work, and stayed away from cultivation, instead write a straight shoujo pampered FL drama.
Currently is a mismatch of story genre and author.

Read only if you seek fluffy stuff.
Don't read if you expect more from the keyword "Villain" "Demonic Sect" "Cultivation"

Flirting in the middle of foes.
Taking sweet time and offering sweet words during a run.

Assassin with no presence detection training.
The target is even sobbing

That's cute and all, but when these demonic sect elders pampered her too much, it just lose the immersion and degraded the story.

Where can I find Steak with 90% discount

Despite all the tease and foreshadowing of new heroines,
We know JP authors are generally overprotective, and it's no different here I guess, MC and Akane (Main Heroine) will be 100% shipped together.

For her ability to "how to hack past the parental locks"?

Translator got DMCE
U have to rely on machine translate

Noice

Wow, all the other characters are stupid beyond stupid.

But MC is also stupid for thinking of sharing his power with many members,
He forgot, that even if one of the members dies, everyone will also reset.

TLDR; Surviving with 50 members is much harder than surviving with only 2 members.

Out of chapter already
https://i.postimg.cc/66vwJrKP/i.jpg

What about Bone Prison, Bone Storm, Bone Lance, Bone Armor?
Those are useless in interpersonal combat?

Like Fer said, "Absolute Command" is not a thing that anyone can do.
Other people just project a will into their summoned Undead, not exactly commanding them.

MC basically leaks that he can command an order on Undead already.

Why are they destroying the precious rune wall?

MC also did not bother to ask, how to create a new battalion commander.
If Fer is gone, puff, all that goodies gone.

Manticore

I like the father's choice
https://i.postimg.cc/hvpbDMSL/i.jpg

I see the corruption of pleasure had gotten to sir yappee

For those afraid of the gender-bender tag,
I think it is safe (And so far at ch 71, it is safe).

The real heroine are still contested.

It's about a hitman that's trying to get into a happy marriage.

It's crazy over the top
The Author cooks something mad every chapter
It's cringy

But me likey
Story is stupid at times but entertaining and funny, don't take it seriously, read for the fun.
Art is great

And the most important point
https://i.postimg.cc/BZ13qv73/i.jpg