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User-0000000069 - 9 months ago
It's Mid of June, but where is the next chapter?
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User-0000000069 TauCeti - 9 months ago
nah, probably he just get some more farming skills, op in farming ways
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But then, you see people like MC and Kaede.
Imagine your normal daily neighbours, about 1/100 of them by random got the activation key to nuclear launch, another 1/100 of them can release resident evil-like virus. And they can do those it at will, anytime if they are willing.

Although I dislike it, seeing what happened so far, on other hand, I can understand what the church is doing.

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User-0000000069 - 9 months ago
What happened to the "Paradise Life" in the title?
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User-0000000069 Banana - 9 months ago
Don't worry, we all know its not going to be Hans / Jenna
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User-0000000069 TauCeti - 10 months ago
Maybe deep down, he wanted this to happen
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https://i.postimg.cc/1RJwk9jN/i.jpg
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Good Point:
Plot twist
Cute daughter
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User-0000000069 - 10 months ago
Early chapters are good, but it went downhill with inconsistencies and brainless MC that goes into denial and puts immediate problems aside for the future and accept the flow as they are presented to him.

System Notif: Your wife is going to die
MC: Oh yes, I'm going to wait until that moment, then save her ass

System Notif: A key ally is going to die
MC: No problem, she is strong, I'll just chill at home, it has not happened

System notif: Your daughter will be subjected to witch hunt
MC: Let's stay at home and watch things unfold, others are already blaming her, but let's just chill and hopefully it won't develop to that.

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And all the solution to the above = MC bruteforce through all of it.


Author tries hard to put MC into "MC a special hero" trope from supposedly a normal mobs, but the delivery is awkward, since it sacrifices MC's brain and other characters' personalities into a low-iq gullible human.
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TLDR;
The author is pushing the MC to become special, the Dragonborn stuff, but it's too forceful, and just becomes awkward since it does not match with the setting of this manhwa.
As a result, now we see other characters becoming stupid, just to push the author agenda for MC to become the Dragonborn.
Look at how many people here comment the sword girl is a moron >.>
She was not this sort fo character in the early chapters, its an inconsistency that happened because the author is forcing it.
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A lot, throughout this series, you see that
Instead of explaining, he always go denying others when the others are close to the fact.
While some things are better kept secret, some things are better explained.

For example, this child hunt quest can be easily avoided if he explained his unique quest (Seol aH 5 tragedy), as it would provide a solution.
When the foe use their explain the future card, likewise, MC can also use his explain the future card.

Another example, his drama with his wife can be avoided if he cooperates with his wife once the wife is released from fate (Seol Ah 2nd tragedy).
Instead, he keeps her in the dark and goes into denial when questioned by his wife, typical korean drama.

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User-0000000069 - 10 months ago
It's too messy and choppy.
Hard to read.

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User-0000000069 - 10 months ago
This is all happening because MC and his stupid mouth.

He really need some Speechcraft
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User-0000000069 - 10 months ago
Get on with the killing, this is slowly becoming another romance manhwa.
FYI, up to this point, MC's confirmed kill is 0

I wish this stay true to the FL as murderer theme.
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User-0000000069 - 10 months ago
Please explain how
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