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Name Withheld Potato - 1724426308
Oddly enough, it's the first chapter I genuinely didn't understand.
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A spoiler for others.

And I read up to when NTR's MC was looking at the rapist's sister - hence my fears of dark shit to come.
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Name Withheld - 1724426059
The fu...? This is HILARIOUS!

I really don't get all the negative crap on the title page.
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What the SHIT?

As short as this was, it had me in fucking stitches!
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Name Withheld - 1724425344
2/5
Too frustrating too often.

I've given this a low score but you should all know that the 3 readers who left comments at the end of the last chapter, all enjoyed it.
So why didn't it work for me?

In the beginning, I had high hopes for this: pretty unique main characters, an urban legend serial killer, a fast pace... after the opening few chapters, I was hooked!
But then it began to enter Retard territory: the everyone's against you, cliché, the way nobody was as seemed, the stupid twist after stupid twist to the point that, eventually, this one did go Full Retard... and we all know to never do that!
By the end, I was kind of skimming, and the translations had a lot of glitches too, but overall, this sadly came across more of an unedited first draft than a honed and toned masterpiece - and that's the real shame: had some more thought and at least another rewrite gone into this, it could've been something to recommend.
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Name Withheld - 1724424695
I'm just glad the MC didn't become a paedo... but the girlfriend leaving was stupid. But not as much so as the Bro Code Breaker dude going after her as soon as she's out the door!

A bit of a naff ending for a thoroughly meh series.
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Name Withheld - 1724423059
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Kodama: YOUR MUM!
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Name Withheld - 1724422729
So Lea became Rea... and did she dump MC to make room for the 12 year old?

I wonder how much the translation affected my enjoyment of this?
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It's the only twist that hasn't been disappointing.
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Would the real Joe Biden then please stand up?


But this 12 year old twice saying she loves MC is not cool... although, "Pedo Pete" would love that.
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Well, this useful caption made it worth reading this far.
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Name Withheld - 1724416709
I'm really not enjoying this - it's so cliché!

So the hot girl who suffered the trauma of seeing the boy she liked get his head caved in by a madman at such a young age, dug up the corpse, hid it in the woods and went to talk to it often, as a coping mechanism for her guilt of him taking her place when she made the give-away sound?
Blonde dude suspects this, so has the unnecessary exposition thought bubble, which, really, just gives it all away!

Fast forward 10 or 15 years - or however long it's been - and the girl, now totally hot, jumps into bed with a random youtuber who's basically a sexual predator... but has to be, because he's a sad, nerdy fucker who does stupid shit for views and couldn't possibly hope to get such a sweet catch by any normal (I mean: moral) means.
Nerdy youtuber then unleashes his inner serial killer (I don't know... maybe the author reasons anyone taking advantage of a mentally troubled woman like that is already seriously deranged?)... and that leads us to where we are now.

Or
The author's a bit more savvy and just dropped a ton of red herrings to completely throw us off track?

Either way, this is bad writing and, were I not so close to the end, I'd drop it!

I was hoping this would pick-up a few chapters ago, but instead, it's gone Full Retard.
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She did. But then, the other chick didn't tell MC she hated him, nor did his gf break up with him.
The translation is kind of arse.

But the exposition is even worse:
"Oh, Glasses Girl, member of the 7..."
Needed dialogue because we absolutely have no idea who the only glasses chick in this whole hot mess is. Sigh.
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Could you PLEASE put a spoiler over that?
I know where NTRevenge was heading, but I was letting them stack (I was also hoping the MC wouldn't do what you described above.

For some reason, this site tells me to log in whenever I try to use the spoiler function, so if you're having the same difficulty, you may want to instead delete the last part of your post.

Also, if you read my comment/review on NTR, you'd have espied how I remarked on it heading in a dark direction and I was hoping it wouldn't go there (this being what you described above - so no double-standards on my part).
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Sigh. I'll engage in conversation about a comic: fine... but don't tell me I wasn't paying attention when there were only THREE girls involved in the nude photo bullying scene (minus the victim).
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Name Withheld - 1724414356
When the hottest chick dies and you no longer give a damn...
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Name Withheld - 1724395926
Yeah, yeah, and you fuck your hot girlfriend in the arse with your dead brother's dick.

MC suddenly sounds crazier than doll-chan.
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Name Withheld - 1724395387
So stupid that the author's choosing not to reveal such basic information here. The gang knows which chick is calling, but we have to wait a chapter... because Cliff-kun.
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Name Withheld - 1724394815
This is supposed to be getting more intense, but I'm finding it to be getting more dull.
Let's hope it picks up again quickly - it's only 43 chapters so I'd rather not drop it mid-way.
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