A writer's gotta write.

Nice way to end the chapter... but, of course, everyone wonders which girl the dad said.

Which one?

I can't blame Yōko there: they invite her to live back with them, but then they want to do private whit while she's in the next room, able to hear everything!

Some readers will argue she's being inconsiderate, but making her listen to them means they're the ones being inconsiderate to begin with.

The boss is the dude!It's always sad that some women can only feel loved when treated like shit, but he has her pegged. Dark haired chick all the way!
Which is a pity, because light haired chick is so adorable.

Finally, her side of events. That was worth the wait too.

Drink, drank, drunk.
Drink up.
I drank it all.
I have drunk it all.

The translations of this have been superb, but proper grammar is swiftly becoming a lost art-form (and this is an oldie).

Poor dude, a woman on each arm and still getting blue balls! Oh, the punishment!

The fu...? This CEO's a dude!How come pretty much every boss I've ever had has been an arse hole?

WTF? It's her place!

And that uncensored pubic mound cover shot surprised me.

WTF? Dark haired girl's messed up!
So she encourages light haired chick to have sex with ML... and then she interrupts and becomes a bona fide cock-block?!I think she's starting to be confused, herself, as to what she wants from her relationship with ML.


P.S. I really hate the u added to an o to show the change of sound; years ago, it was always a o with a solid, flat accent line ( so her name should be: Yōko).

And this is why women are terrible communicators... but always blame everything on the dude misunderstanding!
So light haired chick, insecure in herself and suspecting the dude either likes darker haired chick or used to, just casually throws that out there for a reaction.

Dark haired chick, comfortable in her situation, curious if she could go on like this longer, considers out loud trying again with the dude.

While the poor dude, who likes the light haired chick but is still, deep down, trying to get over dark haired chick, is frustrated that light haired chick seems to dismiss their relationship as a mere fling, while having the seed planted that he doesn't actually have to get over dark haired chick, because there may be another chance!
But does he like light haired chick too much to risk going back to dark haired chick?


Sigh. Women. But at least they're not impossible to understand (just very, very difficult).

Dark haired chick in about 2 seconds: https://i.postimg.cc/zGM0HZ4d/i.jpg

Gotcha.

I'm on chapter 14 now - it's been a good read so far.

That was a damn good chapter; I really like her guilty expression there, at the end, as if she's sullied the purity of their three-way relationship.

Dude, the whole thing is about a man living with two women and engaging in sexual intercourse with them both... how can it not be a love triangle?
I'm just hoping for no lesbian shit, because that'll be when I cash out!

Well, that's fucked up.

This is kind of weird... but then, some poor suckers always seem to attract these sorts of nutty women.

What's that about never putting your dick in crazy...?

1/5
Pretty much dog shit.

Knowing this was only 40 chapters and them admittedly flying by, I went against my own judgment and pushed on to the ending... which was just as bad as the rest of this crap!
Basically, some kid goes into an ultra-realistic VR war game, where... wait for it... he dies.And then he keeps dying. Over and over.

To compare this to brilliant works like, Eternally Regressing Knight, is to do both an injustice; it takes around 19 chapters of this shit for anything to happen, as the MC respawns seemingly endlessly, with zero personal or story progression. Worse than that is the fact that, because it's a game, there's never any sense of him being in any real danger. Some may argue that the breaking of his psyche is the real threat, but it's so poorly handled, it feels more like a kid getting frustrated when dying over and over on some stupidly difficult XBox crap.
Thankfully, this does conclude and wasn't just axed, but with the final fight being nothing but blurry lines with speech bubbles thrown in, even the climax is entirely unsatisfying.

I genuinely feel like I've eaten a turd so you won't have to... yet, despite that, there were some readers who seemed to actually enjoy this!