I'm guessing the war that was skipped over took a while? Otherwise how would Paul be all grown up now? Assuming he's still a young man, around fifteen, I'm assuming a solid two or three years passed. I wish they would have said how long the time skip was instead of having it go unstated.

After 26 hours I start to get auditory hallucinations and hazy shadow stuff, but it doesn't really get worse than that. Granted, the longest I've stayed up is like 53 hours.

I fully acknowledge that this as pedantic as shit, but this is one of my biggest pet peeves. Who is out here pinching an arrow to draw it? I understand that Mediterranean draw or three under may not be the best for close combat, but goddamn those would be leagues better than pinching. To be clear, pinching is a real technique, but it only really works for low draw weight bows. Even with fantasy logic, it doesn't make sense. You can't fully bring to bear your strength with pinch draw.
I wouldn't have a problem with it at all if it wasn't literally every single manga, manwha, and manhua. Has no one who writes or illustrates ever shot a bow before? I guess it's similar to those 'no one animates drums correctly' videos, lol. https://i.postimg.cc/xdVWP1Kt/i.jpg

Poor guy is gonna have to become a clown to juggle all these identities. It doesn't help that he makes up new ones on the fly so often, lol. I give it fifteen chapters before he's a high-ranking agent for the golden eye organization.

What the fuck Murakan! They were just gonna try to capture him and you turned it into a kill order to aura farm.

So a man with experience then. What's the downside?

Call me crazy, but this feels like a set up for a 'power of friendship' ending. Don't get me wrong, I'm not inherently against that, I just hope it isn't one of those "I know you're still in there!" ones. I have faith based on the writing of this story that, at the very least, the ending will be done competently whether or not they go that route. I do really hope they don't though, lol.

Yes, that too, but at this point in the story they didn't know that demon's could get a class in the first place. I'm pretty sure that's established later.

TruePurpleMK is right, the novel rocks. The pacing is also much faster if my recollection serves me right, so you can start from the beginning and it would only take you a few hours to get to this point. The novels are mad cheap too, like 3$ or 4$ per. I read most of them with Kindle Unlimited tho. It's like 13 dollars a month so if you want you can read them in all and then just not renew the subscription. It's not machine translated or anything either, it's just an English novel, so it's quite well written. I only mention that since I've been turned off by the horrible grammar in a few MT webnovels.

She was never stupid, she was naïve. When your from a plane that is so fundamentally different from the world of the living and your not even two years old, some ignorance can be forgiven. Besides that, from the beginning it's shown that she's never actually made a dumb decision when she has the right information and context. If anything, the only thing I'd say is that she's a little too prone to taking risks. The only thing I was kind of confused about is the fact Daniel figure out it was a demon, and then I remembered he's sleep deprived.

Besides that, if I'm being honest, it was kind of obvious it was a demon once a cultist was mentioned. The small details just reinforced the point.

There is no translator. This is an adaption of an english novel, just like the beginning after the end. They meant that you can learn space magic without a class, but each level is equivalent to a year of study. Or that's what I got from it at least. Unless I'm fucked up? Was there a place where they genuinely got them mixed up in the speech bubbles? Cause I didn't see that.

It's been a while since I've read the novel, but I think I remember Edithe mentioning that his antics were embarrassing or something like that. It's been like two years so my mind could be making that up, though.

Does it count as a retcon if it's just an unmentioned detail? It's not like her being colorblind really changes or recontextualizes any interactions up until this point. I mean, it's not great writing, but I don't think it's a retcon. If she's actually blind then maybe, but even then I bet it's something like her seeing through her magic, something the audience could reasonably go without knowing until now. It could just be a normal reveal. I don't want to give this story too much grace, it's had some really shitty writing, but I don't think this necessarily counts yet.

Considering that there was a tl note saying that the author chose to name the swords in english, I'm guessing he just did it cause it would look cool to the native readers. Like an english novel naming a sword a google translated japanese phrase.

Honestly, I wasn't sure about the art change at first, but it's growing on me. Things seem less stiff now.

Damn, who is Fred and what did he do to become pornwha?

lol fair

Yeah, the whole "bathing the world in blood" thing doesn't seem super sustainable anyway. Being the king of a mountain of corpses doesn't sound all that fun.

I'm beginning to see why he'd make such a good demon lord. He started out with low self-esteem, but now that he actually knows he has self-worth it just makes him cool-headed. He can roll with the punches without letting his temper get the better of him because he's experienced worse and decided to be better than those that harmed him. I'm actually glad he didn't go ape shit, it shows his potential as a leader that he can be righteously furious without losing control, unlike other demons.

Holy fuck it was hard to get that down to 3,000 characters. I think they count line breaks or something, because I used a word counter and I was only at like 2,900 something. That took like twenty minutes of cutting and rearranging to make work, so sorry if my critique seems scatterbrained.

If brevity is the soul of wit, then I'm braindead.