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typeou Quanxilly - 1704669886
yes I am. What about it?
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typeou User-4186450718 - 1704549456
Some stories start with a flashforward, but that's only to hype up the reader, youre still supposed to write the story from a good start. Starting so far into the story causes a lot of problems down the line. The police force was introduced awfully because of it and are just used like they're developed elements of the verse, which they aren't. This can be said about most elements of the story.
The author knows he isn't great, that's why he rushed as fast as he could to the most interesting part of his manga, but that's by no mean a good thing. Even the fight between the police force and Sojo was rushed to give us chihiro vs sojo earlier, that's not good at all. At this pace, most of the manga will just be the fights between Chihiro and the other sword users, with a bunch of 2 page flashbacks and interludes
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typeou User-7181551472 - 1704507740
why wouldn't I? I've read far worse than just "in the middle".
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typeou User-8871353662 - 1704480615
No pretty sure the whole magazine moved
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typeou Brik - 1704480002
don't let the meme fool you. It's terribly mid. Your brain just wants to think it's good. There's no story structure and the characters are molded real-time to fit the events, that's enough to stop it from being "great"
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typeou - 1704396742
Reading comprehension hitting an all time low
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typeou - 1704077932
This is like my 4th of 5th reread and I just thought of how great it would be if they overlapped the roles of xun er and na-lan. It would enhance the points both of the characters are supposed to make. Xun Er is supposed to help show off xiao yan kindness, but also with them being basically siblings it feels really cheap unlike what it would be like with a fiancee who should barely know him, while Na-Lan role is to enhance the idea that Xiao Yan is currently useless, which would be enhanced if everyone around her was trying to break off the engagement while she defends him. It would also greatly enhance the first part of the story since instead of xiao yan fighting to... be the one to break the marriage proposal? He would be fighting to maintain it and stay with a loved one
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typeou - 1704076036
Nah that's just mean now
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typeou - 1704075565
now this is peak trolling
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typeou - 1703940381
gotta give prop to the snail, he doesn't exclusively write these boring 1 dimensional villains you find in most wuxia.
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typeou - 1703821782
WTF is happening since when are manhua characters allowed to have balls, be attracted to relevant female characters AND live?!
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typeou - 1703796809
This makes it hard to root for Nie lie. Like what's the difference between him using his knowledge of runes to give wu yazi empty chests and wu yazi using his strength to kill them and get the content? Both seem like betrayal to me.
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typeou Genos - 1703708083
it's a long range attack. Sukuna literally commented on choso's persistence after getting double stabbed
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typeou - 1703707783
https://i.postimg.cc/7ZMBjJBC/i.jpg
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typeou Genos - 1703706446
No??? Choso was right there like 2 chapters ago he's still alive that's all there is to it.
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typeou - 1703535641
I love how the plan failed because she's too dense to figure out that he did not, in fact, confess to her
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typeou - 1703464220
Honestly Nie Li is annoying. The dude is right, he has no right to act so overbearing when he does not love her.
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typeou - 1703458642
this is where you can separate the bad seeds in the comment sections from the sane human beings with basic morality.
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