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This does reeks of a one-shot idea who was accidentally met with a serialization.
The premise is wonderful but how to expand the story from this particular premise is.. As you can see pretty fuckin hard.

Especially so when the title is a self explanatory. Had it been something vague, if they exit the dragons and the story continue that would not be something that detrimental.
But since the title is soo specific once they exit the dragon and continue the atory from there, they will lose the identity of the series since the dragon is no longer in the picture. It's like as if the show Chicago p.d followed their character who moved to nypd but the title stays the same.

I'm actually stoked to see how the stories go. But I think this is going to be a short series 20-40 chapter
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https://i.postimg.cc/sfwZbvMG/i.webp
2 girls in a dragon stomach in a garden that they built in a fantasy settings... Talking about Rome?
Rome really did amazing things. They captured another dimensions too?
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Yeah. I have 3 theory on his mindset

1. The justice mindset.
The minority hero, the savior of the dmaned, the classic emphatetic calculatic Chara where they have a pity or against discrimination against the oppressed. Trying to prove the worth to the world.
Honestly a bit too bland but his method and mask is a class on its own. The main theme is him against the preconceptions of crafter value.

2. The merchant mindset.
The exploiter. The one who sees potential. Just merely sees the potential of value of crafter. Nurturing it for the sake of investment. But still stays morally white. A bit interesting. Main theme is he wants money while still being good.

3. The prover
The one who cannot lose. Have such a pride that he feels that he need to prove to the world that his view is correct. The money is how the world judges so that's how he gonna play. Main theme is him against the world who judge him.
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Your description was wild to say the least
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Seems like your prayer was answered
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I probably couldn't re read this. Those blackened chapter was heavy
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Agreed. Sure she still rocks it now but I still think a dress is better. Lol
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Wow. I initially thought that what you demanded of rudeus is just unreasonable. He is 1 man, who is he that you expect him to change the world morality. Well I guess you recognized that. But that got me thinking

WHO is able to change morality in their immediate vicinity, how and how long???

I thought about it and it's definitely someone who has authority isn't it. But... One can definitely be an authority but crosses the masses morale???
How does this work??
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IIRC. She kinda aware of her condition. One way to imagine is that she lives in 2 world simultaneously. She can moves both body, she is active in 1 world but barely moves in the other. but her perception only perceive one of the 2, the dreamy one.

her perception kinda like this dreamy world where she percepted herself as normal. So she is aware she can't communicate like she used to since no one responding, but does not aware of how she looks irl. Imagine someone dramatic in her mind but her irl is just staring blankly.
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I forgot. Is the ex emeperor is the brother or the father of the current emperor? And is she gonna be friends with MC or not
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