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oonhas
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oonhas - 1745386260
Here it is once again. The all cringy "gotta CONFESS others my deepest secrets, like how I was isekaid/have super powers/possessed other persons body, and how it's shameful that I was DECEIVING you all along, and how I didn't confess these secrets on spot to everyone around me instantly when I had the chance" -trope.. 🤮🤮🤮🤮

LMAO. This is so stupid. He had no reason to confess sh*t to her,
especially since she was nowhere around when the guy was bullied to the point of suicide.
He could've/should've played stupid like before.
You can explain gates/demons/super powers/mana/magic, but not awakening the ability to use new powers?
Yeah that makes total nonsense to me too.
If opening up to her could help at all to his situation? Then sure maybe do it. If it doesn't make things better, then why bother risking it.
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oonhas - 1745381092
L-A-M-E

Why even bother talking? MC should've chopped his limbs and head off at the same moment he saw the dude.
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oonhas - 1745380792
-He didn't kill any of those nobles/royalty who framed/executed him
-He didn't kill any of his bullies
-He didn't kill these two jackoffs
I bet he won't kill the ouroboros leader either. Instead the guy gets killed by some other 3rd party, like some demon etc. that's controlling/using him against other humans.
You can see it right from the story's beginning if we are dealing with an author who makes their protagonist kill other people, or just doesn't no matter what happens.
Let's be real. This MC is what I'd call a "mentally weak". Meaning he wont be killing other people.
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oonhas - 1745378282
MC seeing her just as an angry wild boar piglet with a little bow tie on her head,
was just the most random and adorable sh*t in this chapter lol.
https://i.postimg.cc/bvfp9bTr/i.png

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oonhas - 1744816612
I think MC still doesn't have an understanding, nor has he even tried to really find out, about how valuable those plants are which he looked out for the adventurers guild. (Or have I just forgot about it?) Clearly they are way, way more precious than he has even imagined. In all honesty he should've found out about those herbs before the mission, and how valuable they actually were. Then he coul've made more informed decisions & negotiations regarding the guild and the noble guy.

Also, just my personal opinion but this MC is kinda foolish when he's put on the spot. He should've made up a lie that he has some special power, etc. which can't be thaught to other people when it comes to getting those herbs. Now he basically f*cked himself up.

But then again all he has to do is wait to get the armor, then he can just lie about teaching a group of people to get the grass, meaning he takes them with him to the spot, and just gets them killed there. Then he can just bail out to another city.
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oonhas - 1744737726
Author missed a huge chance here to show how the A-rank party's member associate back into their former lives. Like how they find out their families are still alive and waiting & hoping for their return. Just making the guild leader a sibling or a fiancee to one of the party members was a missed chance for some emotional meetup of lost loved ones.
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oonhas - 1744733527
In Ch 9. MC says while looking at the guild board, that meals cost 1000 ZOR per meal (either on average, or the guild/academy, it wasn't specified),
which I already though to be a translation error of some sort.
And in this chapter the reward for taking down a B-class beast is supposed to cost 8000 ZOR, meaning 8 meals worth to risk your life (actually by all sense, B-class beast is a high one, meaning a party of regular people probably is a minimum to take it down)..? How does that make ANY sense.
This is the reason why you should explain the most basic sh1t information about currency in your world, and how much costs a night at the inn, how much a regular person makes money in a day, etc. etc.
Getting 8 meals worth of money from a B-class beast subjucation just doesn't make ANY sense, especially if it's a party to take it down.
And yeah I get that they can get more money from the body parts of the beast (possibly), but even then 8 meals worth of money makes no sense, since it's a B-class.
So either there's at least one zero too much somewhere, or one zero less somewhere than there should be to make things more sense.
Just saying.
https://i.postimg.cc/Jhnx5y8K/i.png
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oonhas - 1744617386
Murderers & attempted rapists, are forgiven/given second chance on the spot? REALLY?
Also it was implied that MC would've spared them if they didn't instantly turn on him like they did, since MC waited for them to act first,
because if he was gonna kill them eitherway, then why the act of even releasing them? So stupid either way.
And I hate this sh1t when the author doesn't have the balls to make the protagonist a cold-blooded executioner, but instead the villains are killed either by monsters or by the enviroment instead, so that MC gets to keep his hands clean of murdering other people.
I've seen this same sh1t in so many isekai stories already.
I just can't take this protagonist nor this author seriously anymore after this chapter.
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oonhas - 1744610219
MC is basically a psychopath at this point, if him deciding to save the life of his childhood-friend is an "illogical" decision, instead of playing it safe and basically just sacrificing her life to bait the boss. That's the reason I dislike this protagonist.
He always thinks in the moment, and doesn't see the long term benefits for helping people to survive.
Let's not forget that this same bitch MC was crying for help in that orc fight, even though he never helped other people in their fights before.
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oonhas - 1744606896
The irony here is, that if MC as an onlooker was watching some other dude having this fight, and that other poor guy was crying for help, MC would be the last person to help.
He would just not risk it and would just keep on walking, like we have seen him done several times before.
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oonhas - 1744605969
MC just dropping heavy sh1t on his enemies is the most unimaginative thing in this manga..
All those skills to fight with, and he just squeezez them like a bug.
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oonhas - 1743887784
Considering MC had to experience the feeling of death 30x times to get those things, plus the deaths for training the rat.. Everything is super cheap in this store.
The system officially sucks äess hard.
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oonhas - 1743749808
If she hated her foster brother before she met MC, then she didn't even have any reason not to tell him that she was "related" to the bully?
Seems like it was just a lazy plot convenience to be revealed later for cheap drama.
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oonhas - 1743749035
Is this MC mentally ill? He has mood swings like he's going through some menopause sh1t. I feel embarrassed for this author. Do you want us to root for your protagonist, or do you want us despise and pity him? Which is it.
I dislike this sh|t so much right now, especially since this had potential to be decent. Now it's below average, because MC turned into a suicidal b|tch because he saw his crush leave with the guy he planned to murder..?
Yeah okey commit a suicide, but at the very least murder the bully first, and maybe even the girl before you off yourself. That's how anyone with balls would do it.
https://i.postimg.cc/c4rWSCLx/i.png
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oonhas - 1743748103
Yooo what the F was that plot development? MC's bully appears out of NOWHERE, and acts like he has been watching them fight this boss since the beginning, and knows MC is down there somewhere? I was sure MC was just having a dream in a dream type situation.
I just lost all and every amount of likability towards this author for this 3rd rate villain development.
Also why is Arisu still humoring this dude? What does the past matter, she could easily just kill him, no? For all they know, the world has ended, and the past connections shouldn't matter sh1t, like how strong or influental someones family was in the normal reality.
Also MC was prepared to kill this guy, but now his mentality is totally collapsing and acting like some b1tch..? So does he have balls or doesn't he?
This development should only make him want to kill the bully twice as much than before, and maybe the girl among him too.
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oonhas - 1743744708
MC being a lowkey retard for suggesting machine's name be their building, especially since he already saw his bully be alive murdering a person, and surely he has his posse with him.
Also, he had a 4th summon which he never even tried? At least I'm pretty sure we never saw it being used, right?
It could possibly be a cauldron with a ready meal/soup inside, or it could be full of potion/healing liquid, etc.
Seems like such an idiotic move to just erase a skill like that without first properly investigating what it does, especially since he still hasn't seen any texts he can't read.
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oonhas - 1743742789
Why wasn't she in his party? Why isn't everyone already? Seems like a plothole.
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oonhas - 1743736033
If they were gonna let you go they wouldn't force you do it with a gun.
These two, MC and his "bro" are just a bit stupid honestly. Who just goes to meet total strangers like that alone when you could've went together.
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oonhas - 1743733822
This doesn't make sense, because the hallway side of that door should already look like a warzone, having the walls, floor and the cealing be badly destroyed.
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