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Cultured Lost Clone
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725651852
The more i think the worse it gets. firstly this is all the team leaders fault only good thing she did was have heroes train together, not categorizing heroes anymore is so dumb since it could end up with a bike guy versus kingfish situation except theyd have no idea that they only had the ability to stall. you wouldnt use a smoke grenade for a tank and you preferably wouldnt waste a nuke on it either. another thing is why she didnt try to have superhero's stationed in the prison, at all, like instead of eggs you have all your dinosaurs in one room but no guns or tranquilizers or anything of the kind, sure they had power suppressors but it only took one emp to get rid of ALL no to mention they say suppressor so they dont stop it or anything. just WHY? Also how long does it take for an execution around here bro from before was there since Mc just joined equality.
Only good thing is the warden is hot but literally none of this should fly. its like normal prison gaurds not having guns of any sort. speaking of. WHY ARE THEY ARMED WITH BATONS? WHY ARE THERE NO TURRETS OF ANY KIND? since they can open the doors your telling me the suppressors are unable to turn back on but the entire facility can? idk if im missing stuff or what but damn

Anyway the art is good and the fight scenes are nice https://i.postimg.cc/Sxg6Fz93/i.webp
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Great right? https://i.postimg.cc/nc1g60hk/i.jpg
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725643706
Art is cool and all but considering the first thing he did when he got in there was throw a punch that put a hole in the group killing dozens without even breathing heavily, the persuasion dialogue makes no sense. this is also assuming the prisoners didnt hear about him apprehending a world level threat.
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724976818
Ngl i hope that book has backstory cause that is some random god tier item
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Go on then https://i.postimg.cc/MTcTBfgm/i.jpg
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I FOUND THE SOURCE OF THE IMAGE NO WAY https://i.postimg.cc/C193QR57/i.png
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More understandable than most cultivation https://i.postimg.cc/j2GFZm8F/i.jpg
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724963643
We can still salvage her as long as shes a yandere https://i.postimg.cc/28sswbMS/i.png
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Nah this is it guys we're done
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724963313
Okay yeah that pacing is too fast. i dont know why its happening and we dont even get his initial reaction to them carrying him out and im given no reason to care. dont even know how old he is. wild
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724961369
Yeah the other reviews are pretty much on point. give it a read. if you enjoy it then meh if not then yknow 4.5/10
Listen to 'Fighting With The Melody' by Jimmie Urine
made at chap83

Art - its alright nothing gorgeous, not atrocious and not way too weird to be up to personal prefrence

Characters- i can call them consistent, mc's see saw of intelligence stabilizes early on and most of his actions make sense enough. no real growth happens as far as i can tell after they leave the capital.
if its one thing Mc is the type to hide his power if it means getting caught. but this was, so far, only really applicable towards soilders and the like he still protects those he cares about and uses his knowledge half-hazardly(i dont mind escort knights dying doing their jobs)

Plot- it happens alright, it has some alright comedy. Honestly there are a bunch of mistakes but my mind keeps auto moving to the image of knights with shields standing infront of the castle gate. i can confidently say i didnt enjoy the war arc that much since it was apparently a two front war and they simply didnt capitalise on that. and the Necromancer arc afterwards also didnt make much sense due to the scale of the armies that they came from not to mention that 100,000 was split between three countries but alright

Worldbuilding- i dont know if its just my standards or what but the world building is vague at best and pretty bad on average. we atleast know the countries directly around the one mc was born in and their relations. we do get some interesting background on the empire and why its in the state it is . Magic is vaguely explained an is not established at all, neither is aura we just know their stronger than ones without and apparently you dont have to be good with the sword to get it (otherwise mc wouldve been found out easily and quickly). wizard rankings are simply there and have no real explained reason why named like that (we dont know whether they use magic hearts, have circles around the body or what)

essentially mediocrity at most
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i see a isekai reccomended on the side, im off
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This is not only a characteristic of religion https://i.postimg.cc/59gskHrm/i.jpg
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There is no way in hell Princess Kania would succeed Prince Jaeil before Mc. unless you perhaps mean order of birth but that is unlikey
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724958897
Wow. that was pretty unenjoyable. there was no real growth besides fighting style maybe? literally nothing changed about her character. its the exact same character she was when she left Mc the first time. the wall didnt even last long enough for me to care. i guess it showed us she started doing what she planned to do? https://i.postimg.cc/nhyj1kYw/i.jpg
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Only thing i cant really agree with is the countries not having that amount since the war arc (urgh) had 600,000 soilders participating on the three kingdoms side alone and before the general mobilization, which actually could explain some of the villager clothing. everything else you said i can double down on though https://i.postimg.cc/5t0WHqL6/i.png
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Cant even get mad at the mc somehow beating one of the strongest characters with no training who is using the same techniques as him with overall stats that dwarf him before the small level ups anymore. https://i.postimg.cc/c4gSVpwH/i.jpg
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You explained nothing but i understood it all https://i.postimg.cc/3NzkCg5F/i.png
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1724637544
I usually dont like slice of lives especailly modern era ones but this is one of the couple that manage to hold my attention and honestly a full review isnt needed since its mostly interesting and fluff as well as the characters not being cardboard. the story is a simple set up with several elements introduced so its not just "working convenient store and meet all the different races". pretty chill would read
made at Chap 29

besides watching the flatlands movie you should listen to "The Hamilton Polka" by Weird Al Yankovic
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i mean time magic is able to be used freely apparently so who knows?
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