i assume one of the two in suits used teleportation as well as the inside job to get there. mind you all electronics besides communication ones seem to be just dandy , so idk. the real inside jobe was the guns we never got along the way.

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They say after sending lots of mobs to fight him and have the officer chased by dogs (during which she no doubt tried to have the dogs change their ways)
also no shot their innocent when the girl was literally introduced as being able to tell if someone's guilty or not and it being her job. woulda gotten them out ages ago. also send her home and if this story goes in the direction it seems to be going in, well i actually wont be able to get angrier than when i did at the worldbuilding but still.

Her powers should have also told her how and how many the person she's investigating killed right? either way i honestly put her as evil cause watching every one of your coworkers or friends get turned into mutated monsters that attack other humasn, via hear stabbing apparently, and still standing on the sides of those literal monsters cause 'they all have a story' is criminal.
Musta been this kinda think that kept a WORLD ENDING THREAT alive for 30 YEARS https://i.postimg.cc/Y06TRw96/i.webp

the more i think the angrier i get, took a shower and still came back angry. ill let the team leader slideon the no killing rule but brother what is a magical therapist doing on the third level of a prison? why are they armed with a baton? why would you verify their guilt in the prison? why isnt she in a investigation unit? why is she in a prison full of actual monsters ony with the ability to read the past? how did she outrun those magical dogs? why do guards only get batons? why doesnt she love her baby? are there other officers with actually useful powers in a prison full of monsters? who keeps a world level chinese cultivator in their basement for 30 years? how bad of terms do you need to be on to KEEP A WORLD LEVEL THREAT ALIVE FOR 30 YEARS? How long was she running from those dogs? how long was the funeral and how soon did it end for her to still be alive? WHY ONLY BATONS? SERIOUSLY?

i assume they only sent MC in because trying to get tier one heroes would put them in the debt of the hero association (which apparently has been around for more than thirty years) and they dont want that since they apparently still have a bad relationship (cultivator as a verifier cause he's STILL ALIVE?) but did they turn away any heroes that wanted to come? maybe they put a gag order considering there wasnt many to gag honestly but presumably the hero association knows since Mc learned about it but maybe their in too much disarray from losing their pretty bad leader and leading figures.

idk man i slipped in the shower https://i.postimg.cc/nVj5TB5d/i.jpg

HUH? https://i.postimg.cc/7Y04WgFP/i.webp

The more i think the worse it gets. firstly this is all the team leaders fault only good thing she did was have heroes train together, not categorizing heroes anymore is so dumb since it could end up with a bike guy versus kingfish situation except theyd have no idea that they only had the ability to stall. you wouldnt use a smoke grenade for a tank and you preferably wouldnt waste a nuke on it either. another thing is why she didnt try to have superhero's stationed in the prison, at all, like instead of eggs you have all your dinosaurs in one room but no guns or tranquilizers or anything of the kind, sure they had power suppressors but it only took one emp to get rid of ALL no to mention they say suppressor so they dont stop it or anything. just WHY? Also how long does it take for an execution around here bro from before was there since Mc just joined equality.
Only good thing is the warden is hot but literally none of this should fly. its like normal prison gaurds not having guns of any sort. speaking of. WHY ARE THEY ARMED WITH BATONS? WHY ARE THERE NO TURRETS OF ANY KIND? since they can open the doors your telling me the suppressors are unable to turn back on but the entire facility can? idk if im missing stuff or what but damn

Anyway the art is good and the fight scenes are nice https://i.postimg.cc/Sxg6Fz93/i.webp

Great right? https://i.postimg.cc/nc1g60hk/i.jpg

Art is cool and all but considering the first thing he did when he got in there was throw a punch that put a hole in the group killing dozens without even breathing heavily, the persuasion dialogue makes no sense. this is also assuming the prisoners didnt hear about him apprehending a world level threat.

Ngl i hope that book has backstory cause that is some random god tier item

Go on then https://i.postimg.cc/MTcTBfgm/i.jpg

I FOUND THE SOURCE OF THE IMAGE NO WAY https://i.postimg.cc/C193QR57/i.png

More understandable than most cultivation https://i.postimg.cc/j2GFZm8F/i.jpg

We can still salvage her as long as shes a yandere https://i.postimg.cc/28sswbMS/i.png

Nah this is it guys we're done
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Okay yeah that pacing is too fast. i dont know why its happening and we dont even get his initial reaction to them carrying him out and im given no reason to care. dont even know how old he is. wild

Yeah the other reviews are pretty much on point. give it a read. if you enjoy it then meh if not then yknow 4.5/10
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made at chap83

Art - its alright nothing gorgeous, not atrocious and not way too weird to be up to personal prefrence

Characters- i can call them consistent, mc's see saw of intelligence stabilizes early on and most of his actions make sense enough. no real growth happens as far as i can tell after they leave the capital.
if its one thing Mc is the type to hide his power if it means getting caught. but this was, so far, only really applicable towards soilders and the like he still protects those he cares about and uses his knowledge half-hazardly(i dont mind escort knights dying doing their jobs)

Plot- it happens alright, it has some alright comedy. Honestly there are a bunch of mistakes but my mind keeps auto moving to the image of knights with shields standing infront of the castle gate. i can confidently say i didnt enjoy the war arc that much since it was apparently a two front war and they simply didnt capitalise on that. and the Necromancer arc afterwards also didnt make much sense due to the scale of the armies that they came from not to mention that 100,000 was split between three countries but alright

Worldbuilding- i dont know if its just my standards or what but the world building is vague at best and pretty bad on average. we atleast know the countries directly around the one mc was born in and their relations. we do get some interesting background on the empire and why its in the state it is . Magic is vaguely explained an is not established at all, neither is aura we just know their stronger than ones without and apparently you dont have to be good with the sword to get it (otherwise mc wouldve been found out easily and quickly). wizard rankings are simply there and have no real explained reason why named like that (we dont know whether they use magic hearts, have circles around the body or what)

essentially mediocrity at most
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i see a isekai reccomended on the side, im off

This is not only a characteristic of religion https://i.postimg.cc/59gskHrm/i.jpg

There is no way in hell Princess Kania would succeed Prince Jaeil before Mc. unless you perhaps mean order of birth but that is unlikey

Wow. that was pretty unenjoyable. there was no real growth besides fighting style maybe? literally nothing changed about her character. its the exact same character she was when she left Mc the first time. the wall didnt even last long enough for me to care. i guess it showed us she started doing what she planned to do? https://i.postimg.cc/nhyj1kYw/i.jpg

Only thing i cant really agree with is the countries not having that amount since the war arc (urgh) had 600,000 soilders participating on the three kingdoms side alone and before the general mobilization, which actually could explain some of the villager clothing. everything else you said i can double down on though https://i.postimg.cc/5t0WHqL6/i.png