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FlavoredTwist
1419 points
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522 Comment(s)
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FlavoredTwist Phyrite - 1767408263
i think she was a fan girl of dead-dude, might have been in the same party or clan as him but if im remembering right she did look up to him at least somewhat
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FlavoredTwist - 1767403698
thank fuck this didnt get dragged out massively
but i can see that girl (forgot her name lmao) basically throwing a gargantuan fit and turning to the dark/evil group, or maybe even making her own branch of it thats anti-everything-tower-related and wont even play nice with the tower NPCs like the other dark group that will work with demons n shit
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FlavoredTwist - 1767401402
'if they are praying to you, you should save them you demon'
"ight, bet"
'wait what'
*a wild Mary Sue has appeared and used rage!*
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FlavoredTwist - 1767217000
lmfao love it when MCs are scammers to the max, gotta milk every coin/dollar/won from everyone too stupid to get involved in gambling
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up to ch20 now
its still fast paced, and i feel if they would just slow it down at least a little, its still ok
but it doesnt hold back so its a good 4-5/10 with the predictable plot and pacing being the real problems, but if it slowed down i could easily give it a 5-6
and for those that might get upset at violence, skip on this one, there isnt any gore but it does get intense
but it does need an OP tag might also need a yuri tag in the future for how many friendly female side characters there are but it might just end up not having any romance and sticking to the main plot with it being yuri bait
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FlavoredTwist - 1767039949
so far at chapter 5
its pretty fast paced and uses time skips a lot
its not great... but its also not horrible, just predictable
id give it a 3-4/10
certainly could be a lot better, but its not so bad that youd just blacklist it and move on and just another 'read it if you have nothing else to do/read'
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FlavoredTwist - 1767037752
that... it feels like the chapter got cut half way though?
with how most of these types go i was expecting someone from his fathers family to interrupt them while they were eating and then the next chapter having him tell them no, they get pissed and do something that antagonizes the MC, and it spirals from there... not for it to just end with them eating peacefully...
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FlavoredTwist Noroi - 1767033852
well i imagine that he is point stuff out to them, like hidden quests or items 'off screen' so they are taking longer and dont have so much already memorized like MC does, but its still taking longer than i feel like they should, i think it would be better if they were like 10ish floors behind him and not almost 20 since it would show MC is faster but they are still moving
but she was also going a lot faster than MC since in the 'first life' he took his time on easy mode and was almost on par with her thanks to all of the skills and items he found while she had just rushed
and i believe that there is 100 floors, since thats usually the amount that tower stories have
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FlavoredTwist Phyrite - 1766844213
hell, with how this story is going with the main religion and how that god abandoned this world, i wouldnt be surprised if its revealed that the holy nation or the saintess's stigma forced her to stay in the magic nation and it was later used as a political tool to make the rift worse
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and he is arguably already halfway there thanks to the lych life vessel he 'has'
all he would need to do is get one for mary and make himself her life vessel and shorten the revive time to as instant as possible and they would basically become immortal unless something could kill both of them at the exact same time
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FlavoredTwist - 1766755883
wonder if her new heterochromia will stay or be temp for this arc
i am biased since heterochromia is bad ass (and more media needs it) and i hope its permanent, maybe giving her ice magic when she clears the dungeon so she can use all 3 powers/energies
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FlavoredTwist Gluttony - 1766733095
fr the people outside the tower dont realize just how strong people in the tower actually are
would figure they would at least have some assumptions since they stopped an invasion a while ago and they are much stronger now compared to then
and if they can stop something modern weapons cant, the fuck do some cops think they can do? its like arresting super man, hes only going along with it bc he wants to
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FlavoredTwist - 1766661250
no idea how this will go in the future but...
to me it seems like all those early deaths on earth were caused by the gods bc they were interested in transmigrator stuff
if so i cant help but wonder if that would be a major plot point or more of a 'old man screams at sky'
might not be brought up again... but chekhovs gun since otherwise it could have been a 'i got some sus insurance and accidentally hit confirmed as i died' but it was mentioned that people were dying on mass
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FlavoredTwist - 1766607752
lmfao there is no one in MCs life thats normal besides the 1st girl (forgot her name since she hasnt shown up in a while lol rip)
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once you get to the point you have a chance to loose levels when you lv up (70+) you get 200 points per lost level and liking comments at most is 10 points
since getting to 70 the first time (like back in july since ill sometimes go up a fair bit then drop down several weeks of levels in 2 days) ive never had below 1000 points, usually having 1400 to 1500 (the max)
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might be trying to get him drunk enough to just hand it over so the baron can claim all the rep and glory
but it would be nice if hes actually a good guy and just wants MCs help with some more dangerous monsters and willing to be the backer for MC and the workshop as payment
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FlavoredTwist - 1766333298
my bet is they are going to find the rabbits, and maybe even getting a 'we will release only them' kinda deal but Mr.White-Knight is going to cause a major scene and cause the city to turn on the group
either that or there will be some group that wants to start an uprising to free everyone around the time they find the rabbits and he joins them but they turn out to be evil as well and want to put all the non-demis in chains
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giraffe ancestors caused sudden growth spurt
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forgot about that since i read too many stories and like 99% of murim stories use purple as the energy of demons
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