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Devdiablo
662 points
Level 70
175 Comment(s)
847 Upvote(s)
Devdiablo - 1776804986
It has an interesting premise, It's promising.
As long as the author doesn't fumble, this will be a good read.
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Devdiablo - 1776804915
FUCK, this is where I have to wait!?
Just when I got into the "read" mood, I get forcibly cold turkey'd by the lack of chapters.
https://i.postimg.cc/J4Kf4Qqg/i.jpg
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Devdiablo - 1776726246
Feels rushed, it includes rape early on, and is quite generic.

I'll bookmark it, not because it's good, but because i'm bored.
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Devdiablo Eknek - 1776346646
...
https://i.postimg.cc/vZGvDytG/i.png
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Devdiablo Jarshan - 1776344931
How many people entered? 8
How much did the counter increase? 6
Either those two natives counted toward their population the entire time they were outside... or 2 of the group didn't register.
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Devdiablo - 1776285633
So far only one chapter.
Seems reasonably generic, but that's what we're all here for.
https://i.postimg.cc/cJzysDw6/i.gif
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Devdiablo - 1776121773
Absolute Banger!
This might get repetitive and boring in the future if the author decides to go the generic route, but so far it encapsulates the idiotic tendencies of people and doctors somehow having to fix the issue perfectly.
And because it follows human idiocy, it's comedic as heck.
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Devdiablo - 1776118135
PFFFFFT, this is so realistic it's stupid... If fantasy monsters and such existed, these kinds of problems would most definitely happen on a daily basis.
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Devdiablo - 1776101705
This story takes on the base disney fantasies like rapunzel, cinderella, sleeping beauty, etc... and tries to turn it into a big overhanging thing that is supposed to wow you.

So far, it seemed interesting in the beginning because of the shock factor, but once that wears off, it becomes kind of mediocre.
It changed into the basic "A pair has to defeat other pairs to become the winner, type cliche. Like we see with Freezing and other such media"
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Devdiablo - 1775516071
Almost everytime I read this, I notice myself smiling contently.
https://i.postimg.cc/Qts7JB06/i.gif
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Devdiablo - 1775426470
Same energy:
https://i.postimg.cc/05BgT3b4/i.gif
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Devdiablo - 1773337914
Really? You get reincarnated into a new world, the air is clear, the plants are healthy, and the water is full of life...
And you introduce plastic... even plastic's creator regrets inventing it.
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Devdiablo - 1773258352
Here, for you. Use it as you like:
https://i.postimg.cc/7Y6nF8hX/i.png
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Jeez, you uh... seem to either be younger than 12 or very mentally behind.
Either way, you might want to consider a mental assylum.
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I expected something more childish, since that's the cliche.
But holy damn, this is so much better!
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Devdiablo - 1772443692
Ooooh, "the sacrifice of a stranger" is the good part.
This is going to be fun, I wonder how they'll draw the scenes.
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