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Anonymoose Sananana - 1709345328
Rereading and I still feel this is probably the hardest any first chapter has hit me. Right in the damn feels.
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Anonymoose Donny_Dont - 1709344975
That's... like bragging you haven't been able to maintain a relationship...
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Anonymoose Echo419op - 1709343588
No, no it really isn't. Well, in the context of combat training being able to fight steadily regardless of danger is important. It's just not worth trying to kill a student over.
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Anonymoose Dat Folk - 1709342678
Would be hilarious if he told them "Cleaning up your mess," but I doubt that'd go over well.
If I could enter this book I'd drop into this conversation and say that.
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Well there's still time for a feather or more to be removed... though that's generally extremely painful, from what I've heard. Akin to losing a nail from one of your fingers.Ooo, a workshop! What kinda stuff do ya do in there? Woodwork? Metalwork?
As for you crossdressing...https://i.postimg.cc/YSGysFHS/i.png

All jokes aside, if ya look good then ya look good. And being able to recognize that is quite beneficial.

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Anonymoose Meme D Lord - 1709336840
I mean, he didn't fully ignore it. Especially given the next chapter
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Anonymoose VM - 1709336789
Time to get rid of it by our mc popping the pills in his mouth...
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Anonymoose Meme D Lord - 1709336737
He is their head of finance, after all.
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Anonymoose Chun 0w0 - 1709271699
I am so dang disappointed. Wanted another nice character.
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Same, tbh. Though who cares when the story is imagined so ofc we'd be entering it as our imagined selves. Therefore, we could successfully protecc
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Has the little one managed to pill out any feathers? Also long hair.. do you tie it back or just let it hang loose?(*) <seperate questions> Ok so Aky plays with your hair? Like, does she mess around with tying it different ways or styling it? Or do you mean similarly to a cat where it's just batting it around?

(*I honestly couldn't deal with my hair if it were long because mine is so damn thick it'd probably weigh a kilo just when reaching below my shoulder blades... that wouldn't be good for my neck.)
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I mean whether I'd be my imagined self, cuz in that case then ofc I can protecc without any chance if failure. After all, the only limit to my imagination is is what I can comprehend.
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As long as it's purely necessary. I've heard that having a kid, especially really young ones, can be really hard on your sleep. Also now I can't get the image of a flaming bird with long, flowing locks out of my head.. I can't take such a mental image seriously. Also, it took me a second to process whether you meant Aky is pulling on your feathers, or your daughter. I think from how you wrote it Aky was the one pulling your feathers but I could be misreading that.
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Anonymoose Chun 0w0 - 1709197391
The thing is, even with his gramps there, if he fks around and injures Jiwoo heavily, he's gonna get his shit kickedin.
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