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User-0000000069 - 1718953595
People keep saying it's good, read 30ish chapters.
I'm questioning it, and lots of things don't make sense if you think it normally.
MC becoming an idiotic character after released form the tutorial, this seems force and awkward, MC was not that sort of character in the early chapters.
Think of it like Saitama (One PUnchman), but the delivery is worst due to the difference on how the author treat his work in the early chapters and later on.
For example, in the beginning it was supposed to be serious world settings and "SURVIVAL" genre in it.
But continuing, "Survival" is nowhere to be seen, and everything else seems like a joke, and the plot is a comedy. And I don't find the jokes funny.

The biggest difference with One-PunchMan, is that OnePunchman's author treatment toward his own work is constant throughout his work, there is no shift in settings/atmosphere/genre, on top of real funny comedy, which makes One-punchman a great work.

Finally, I feel some "Gay" vibe from this work...
I might be wrong, but it seems to me that the author fetish leaks in this work.
And I'm not comfortable with this.

I'm not sure if it continue this way in the future,
Many recommend me to keep reading it, but I'm dropping it, can't muster the willpower to continue.
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User-0000000069 - 1718942855
Finally, an update after 2 years T-T
Sis need to appear soon

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Also, Why not if he could.
Rather than wait for CD nad letting enemy dodge your long range projectile.

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our MC still far from his goal, so I don't think so

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Yeah, totally sus
Either investigator or a dumbass.
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At point no 2.

The only yabai here is the DV waifu and the torturer waifu.
The demihuman cat girl (Again, just don't cheat) and the maid, I don't see anything of issue with them.
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No, he really get a free gift for all the bad things he did (But Kazuma's the least guilty out of all the husbands).
All he need is hire a clerk, let waifu be waifu.
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Actually that's still pretty naive of MC.

I know a peep that fixed a girl, and now life happily.
Which means, if those husbands did things correctly, this would be a reward for them. Village chief only profit from this, and from what I see, is easy mode for Zector (just don't cheat) and Kazuma (just hire a clerk, keep waifu as waifu, but again he's the least guilty of them all).

Even if MC instruct the girls to make their life a suffering, I doubt they would do it, since now its their married life.

Finally, the girls MC bought for them are "slaves", which meant, aren't they supposed to be obedient to the owner (not Ceres, but the husbands).
Ceres did not bought and release them, but bought them as slaves and transfer their ownership.
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When you play an RPG game, even when the MC might be a random street kid, when has it ever failed for the MC to be burdened with a world level crisis?
Source: Any JRPG out there.
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Let things cook,
I think MC is just being naive here, but
I can only hope it will be justice well served for the milfs
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This is better,
The WN have many plotholes and forced (Awkward) hostility or development.

The WN in this series is an unpolished Draft, and IIRC the author did mention that he wrote some of the chapters while being under the weather or drunk or simply forcing it while on writers block.
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She only warns and advice though, not in any way telling him to stop making a team/group.
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User-0000000069 - 1718507898
It's Mid of June, but where is the next chapter?
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nah, probably he just get some more farming skills, op in farming ways
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But then, you see people like MC and Kaede.
Imagine your normal daily neighbours, about 1/100 of them by random got the activation key to nuclear launch, another 1/100 of them can release resident evil-like virus. And they can do those it at will, anytime if they are willing.

Although I dislike it, seeing what happened so far, on other hand, I can understand what the church is doing.

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User-0000000069 - 1718250970
What happened to the "Paradise Life" in the title?
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User-0000000069 Banana - 1718250874
Don't worry, we all know its not going to be Hans / Jenna
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Maybe deep down, he wanted this to happen
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