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ProtoMerlin0812
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Before, kinda forgot to check the new chapters before commenting.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1748237261
Peak. I need not say more.

Good action and drama, teared up once. Not too optimistic on the romance aspect yet but... Anyways, give it a read since its fun.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1748237079
Boring. The art feels inconsistent too is this ai?
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1745153724
As someone who's currently reading the novel, this sh*t doesn't exist. All I needed was to see one chapter somewhere in the middle and I could already tell that it will disappoint. Just read the novel guys, this was such a huge potential wasted.
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This is the exact kind of comment I'd expect from you. That dude he beat up was innocent but he need to put up a front that they were in the right since their reputation would take a hit if they admit being guilty of tampering with the candle. Mc is not a good person, surprise!
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1738028625
The crane... SHE WAS WAITING FOR A BABY LMAOOO
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1727195416
This villain was cold, but Mabel's appearance was freeeeeeeeezzzzing.
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Honestly feel the same. The player dude could have been kept around for a more interesting character development.
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After reading the first chapter, I was about to comment that this was my speculation. I've never seen it done before so I thought I was some genius for figuring it out lol.
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As it turns out, this story is just a big irony. I do get it tho. Most stories mess up when its around the ending, or perhaps the climax? It's either of the two, or both. Unless the story was planned properly from beginning to end, but most stories are written on a whim (HSY's take as an author from ORV). Being an author is not easy... Luckily, my work ain't that popular and it isn't that good either to become popular so I'll never die from stress due to hate comments lol.
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Can you spoil me more about what happens? Like, what was the reason for that?
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It somehow managed to fit in all my favourite tropes in one story and the execution was not bad. The romance subtleties reminded me of visual novels. From an objective point of view, it's just above average story, but to me, it's one of the best reads I've had so far. This is probably like how I would view solo leveling. Technically, it's not actually THAT good in comparison to stories like LOTM but the fact that I enjoyed it this much just speaks volume, at least for me. 10/10(?) My standards aren't high, if I enjoyed it then that's all that mattered so that rating seems fair.
Read it for romance and comedy. The plot isn't actually bad too. It has lots of potential, since the setting and worldbuilding was done well. Nothing too crazy so far at chapter 72 but you could see it all building up, preparing to erupt at the right time. And if you sticked around for that, you sure are going to have a blast because I'm sure I would, knowing that the author actually knows what he's doing.
TL;DR: I love it. Read it for romance or comedy. Huge potential. Characters are well written.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1723565339
THIS STORY IS SO PEAK!
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25 chapters in and I could say that the comment below me is pretty accurate. Mixed up tropes which reminds me of ORV (of course not the same level of story telling) but yeah. Less cringe, genuinely became more interesting.
Main plot revolves around MC trying to stop everyone from killing him, and all sorts of tropes got used like transmigration and time travelling. I think what I found interesting is that there is this prophecy of him dying and as he kills the guy who's supposed to kill him, it just gets replaced by some other guy too. I can smell potential dilemma, because at the process of stopping the people trying to kill him, he also gets to learn more about humanity.
TL;DR: Huge potential, but the author's execution drags the quality down.
Treat it like comedy/don't take it too seriously and it's quite enjoyable.
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ProtoMerlin0812 Gidae - 1723289935
They're pretty funny to me lmao.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1723267727
Very interesting.
Edit: This one's really good. I don't need to say much, just read it.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1723259439
Cringefest from the very first chapter. I could probably deal with the cringe but I don't wanna read it to get bored till the end. I'll try reading it til the tenth chapter tho so I'll come back.
Edit: After 10 chapters, I could only keep on reading this because there's a ntr potential. The story doesn't get any better, but it becomes more bearable. (It became more like comedy to me tbh.)
Dialogues are too plain it reminds me of satire instagram reels/yt videos making fun of mainstream tropes, which adds to the bit of comedy. I'm enjoying it the way the author didn't intend to but hey, at least I'm having fun.
The MC infiltrated human society, does his bare minimum to make this NPC side characters look up to him while he's in disguise. These NPC side characters (I can't feel a shred of personality from them) would literally fall for anything.

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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1723258257
Took me like, less than 24 hours to catch up after months of not reading this.
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