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ProtoMerlin0812
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1752585406
Beautiful. This was too beautiful. 10/10

Art is great, it gets better as time goes by don't worry. The story is great, people call this pacing too slow I say its just right. Of course, there's part of the plot that isnt perfect, but when a story was made with passion, it can never bad.
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Ok, maybe its just that the artists are just super lazy with this one. They use the same image for three panels, just resized or something. Its very weird. Also, the AI part feels so true idk why you don't think so too. Its like they fed the machine with their artstyle then let them mass produce the art slop. Idk, it really just have that feeling. Or maybe because I feel like this series is junkfood? Like, it was made without passion, soulless like Ai art. I cant feel any love for their work. It's like it came out straight from a factory instead of a handcrafted product.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749989183
These kids right here blaming religion for everything. Yall need to grow up and start to learn how to differentiate between fiction amd reality.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749985280
On the lead! She deserves it tho. The redhead does deserve some love too
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749983742
Mc blushed so hea ainr impotent
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749982614
Where t fck is the original mc?????
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749981707
Having harem of strong girls is nice and convenient, but you gotta make sure you know how to handle them
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He's not some high leve character from the start. He's just a trash, and that academy is rottem with same kind of trash everywhere. Maybe he would have gotten far if not for the princess' intervention tho but his character is supposed to be someone who's easily forgotten so don't overthink it.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749972429
Shes the true heroin, haven't read the novel but I just know. A gut feeling.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749965744
A very precise plan is bound to fail if there's a tiny mishap in the details.
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Noble blood genetics man. Some people are just born like that.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749550055
Its really good shii. Fresh and all that. Also, those two are lovers they just dont know that yet lmao. There's no unnecessary drama between the two which usually what f*cks up stories like this. I love this one.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749527800
HOSTELLLL!!!! ELI JIANG LETS GOOOOO
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749469505
Hate to admit it but I relate harder to that scammer kid. I'm not someone great like the protagonist, I am just that extra that will be forgotten one day. It's kind of a weird reality check. I don't have the same pretty ideals, I'm just a simple man trying to live for someone, doing what he can to impress a girl, something like that. It's so mediocre, I fantasized about the same things that the kid did. I can see myself in him, and it's been a while since I've found a character I could relate to since I haven't been reading slice of life genre for a while.


Not trying to pity farm or anything, I just thought it was funny. "I will make that girl fall in love with me" and "I will become someone much cooler than him so you'll choose me" are things I've said to myself a lot of times before already. Of course, that was the result of a foolish youth. I'm still at that phase were I'm looking forward for a good future, but I buried those useless feelings of affection towards any woman that I could have. I thought it will all end up the same anyways.

That kid getting c*cked was the icing on the cake lmao. I remember my first heartbreak towards someone I never had a chance with.
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749467828
Forget Amy we got something better here
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ProtoMerlin0812 - 1749125647
The characters are so well written, it evoked raw emotions from me it feels different to those other cultivation stories I have been reading the past few weeks.

Like, I can feel the characters to be alive. They aren't just "I will do bad things because mc needs an antagonist", they made the characters feel complex. The way they use metaphors for the dialogues just suits my taste. Even the silence of the characters says a lot, which really proves that the author did great creating them.

Like the fact that if you give someone a chocolate on the 14th of February could mean a love confession, there are just things that would mean a lot more if you let your actions do the talking. And I think the author nailed it on that part.

10/10, anything I enjoy is a perfect 10/10 for me now.

Art good too, the worldbuilding is just great while the action part isn't all that bad either.
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Sorry guys it really gives edited AI vibes because of how inconsistent the art is. I don't know how no one is pointing it out and its only me who have said it here. Maybe my eyes are just bad? Its so hard to read because of the inconsistency, like I can get used to reading stuff like martial peak that changes it artstyle throughout cyz they change artists but the inconsistency in this one is mid chapters like what?
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Just looking at the cover art, those are 4 pictures cropped out and meshed up together, then the placed the title it honestly feels like this was done through AI can someone verify?
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