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aFFi
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aFFi Zero - 1733148585
Woah, that's one of the dumbest comment on this thread.
"Man, I don't like that my car sometimes pushes me out of the road!"
"Go make your on car 💀then"
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aFFi Rimuru Tempest - 1733076130
I like lore and character development, but not at the expense of the original story.
A good example of all that done right is actually the manga where you got your nickname.

I don't like when I get promised something and then given something completely different.
I think the main issue is that authors don't ever want to end their successful stories, so they deviate from the original objective and kinda lose their way to make things longer.
Solo Leveling was a masterpiece partly because it ended (sort of). That's why I hate Berserk too.
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aFFi - 1733058197
Still skipping.
Whatever happened to "Auto Hunting With My Clones".
We barely see any clones anymore, and it's more defending than hunting now.

I keep reading the beginnings of incredible stories, but everything always goes to shit fast, and I drop it then find another new one to start.
I would really like a story to end with even a tiny little bit of relevance with the titles or the start...
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aFFi - 1732914663
"And here, tonight, we're ashamed to present the new acting troupe: The Manipulative Gaslighting Liars!"
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aFFi - 1732775006
Ok, I take back what I said in the previous chapter.
The system is actually doing its job, and the author didn't break the rules he put in place.
I don't see the point of this constellation descending, but it seems pretty obsessive and kinda dumb, so why not...
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aFFi - 1732730560
Fucking 3 months waiting to see this fight, just to get cucked by a filler flashback chapter about someone I don't care, with the chapter ending with ANOTHER cliffhanger for the fight.

This is bullshit, I really am thinking that we should cliff-hang authors that do this kinda stuff.
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aFFi Bread - 1732644070
NO!
Do the threesome!
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aFFi TheImage - 1732542020
But he lost XP because of this death, and a prophet, and a leader, and a king... and maybe even a friend.
I'm thinking that makes it worst than losing a bit of faith.
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aFFi - 1732537512
Why didn't he force descent?!?
He might freeze and possibly die, or just absolutely 100% die for sure if not used.

I get that the MC was surprised, but that's the dumbest choice he made since the start...
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aFFi - 1732421950
OK, so, the MC trained with the confirmed most powerful people ever.
He isn't at their level yet, but he did get recognize as strong by the strongest entity ever, and not too far off to the legendary patriarch that dominated the world.

If he struggles against any one person now, in terms of power, that would be BS.
I hope the author puts forth other issues, like political troubles or the fact that he is still only one person and might have trouble again many.
Please don't suddenly introduce someone stronger out of nowhere...
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aFFi Oburci - 1732392168
Pretty much what I was thinking too.
I would add that there will be some kind of event right before the MC kills him, where the redhead manages to escape, to cause trouble later on.

I really hope he just dies, but that's a popular trope recently.
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aFFi - 1732391767
This side quest is kinda boring.
I hope this filler ends soon.
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aFFi - 1732388933
Fuck.
I was wrong in my comment from last chapter.

He really wants to build nukes.

I'm a bit sad that he decided to go this route, but I can't wait when he'll showcase the nuke to pretty much medieval people...
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aFFi - 1732307638
This is so nonsensical.
They never asked for the money, as it wasn't a debt, but an investment.
So you can't compound the interests, which would be the only way to get to this amount.

So, let's say the village is 100 years old, to be generous, that's a 100% interest rate annually. And the village isn't 100 yo, the old dude was clearly present when it was created.
No contract, no initial arrangement, no proof, nothing.
Also, it was clearly stated that the investment gives access to part of the profit, not the whole shebang.

I'm wondering what would be the consequences if the village defaulted on the debt... like, violence? If so, and if I was the MC, I would probably instill fear so that they don't get any funny ideas...

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aFFi - 1732271495
Hey guys, just a quick question, I'm kinda confused, maybe I'm mixing some of the VR Manwha I read.

They make money playing this game, right?
Like, a fairly big amount, if I'm not mistaken.

So why is the MC still acting like he's poor?
He is the biggest streamer on the most popular game, right? He should be swimming in money by now, no?

Did I miss or forget something?!?
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aFFi TheImage - 1732080781
I really hope he doesn't bring nukes to this world.
That would make the witches quickly obsolete for war, energy, warmth, light, some medical applications, ... and the implication of nuclear warfare isn't really a good thing.

Also, uranium or plutonium aren't really found in big chunks like shown in this chapter, at least not on Earth's surface.
Copper would burn green...
Aluminium would be pretty good for the future, tungsten too... or titanium, but they have nothing to do with green.
Coal, copper, aluminium and steel are probably the best things one could find to induce an industrial revolution, I think... but I can't remember what type of materials the MC is already using.

I'm guessing the green is actually the witch's powers.
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aFFi - 1732022210
What's the point of the rules and the system if the constellations can just willy nilly invade and ignore it all...
I hope next chapter shows that constellation getting kicked out by the system... if not, the rules of this world are just... shit.

Don't establish rules in your fictional world if you then go and ignore them for the most insipid reason...
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aFFi - 1732018311
This was utterly useless.
A chapter full of only teaser, cliffhanger and probably situations that "aren't what they seem to be"...
What a waste of time.
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aFFi Knight Zornnah - 1731902762
The author (Liz Takayama) is actually not a doctor.
She apparently consult heavily with actual doctors tho. No official information about said doctors were made public, but there's rumors that it could be the whole Tokyo U Hospital...

I think that's one of the things that makes this story incredible, and above the rest of the medical manga/manwha.
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aFFi - 1731500942
Oh.
Good.
I was upset when the MC just let the girl die, but they've acknowledged the mistake. Turning the mistake into characters development.
That's new.
I like this.
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