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yilo User-4133159469 - 1715303497
the paradox will start soon, it starts with farting, itching, sweating, thirst and your age changes rapidly, your mental status will turn into that of an insane person before you burst into a blood balloon before popping. should multiple versions of yourself find yourself and interract with eachother then reality itself will start to collapse in on itself in order to fix this paradox.
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yilo - 1715302188
gu change: https://i.postimg.cc/NMffthYR/i.gif
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yilo - 1715300348
well time to farm some money. https://i.postimg.cc/pL4dKcfH/i.gif
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yilo - 1715221635
bruh what a fucking trash organization, like if they had someone be bribed and fk with the test. that would be w/e. but the guy is actively fking with the examination without anyone batting an eye...

mr author, i understand you want to give audiance a trash character to hate on. someone mc needs to defeat in order to grow further, but you are going about this all wrong. you should have given the bad guy some kind of reasoning other than i bullied someone and he ignored me now i shall stake my entire being and reputation to make him fail the hunter test. i dont care how braindead you think your audiance is, this shit aint flying. i am like on the edge of dropping this manhwa.
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yilo - 1715220095
if this was an anime, this would be end of s1.
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yilo YAMEROOO - 1715172792
lmfaooo i laughed my ass off at the 2nd part of your comment.
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yilo - 1715045177
this is ass... aight i am done.
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yilo Monk Haneul - 1715042764
worst part about it is, its pretty fun to read. but every 3 chapters i am standing there staring into my dark screen wondering what the fuck is this? why am i still reading this... before pressing next button.
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yilo yilo - 1715041607
after thoughts:
the author reminds me off of those girls who go to mcdonalds after standing 20mins in line, they are at the cassier to order. but they cant decide if they wanna be healthy and get a crappy salad and large water or be a fat fuck and order a bigmack with extra bacon, extra cheese, no pickles no onions with an extra serving of large fries and a large coke. so they instead decide to the absolute worst and order both of them. that is exactly how i would describe the author and his choices in making this manhwa.

an absolute fat fuck who cant decide what to eat so he chose everything.
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yilo - 1715040539
review:
----------------------------------------------heavy spoilers below this point read at own risk------------------------------------
premise:
idk how to honestly describe the premise because its a fucking hotpot of multiple genre's mixed into one. the guy who is mc, is aparently an author, a hunter, a god, there are constellations, RTS-game like feature. all of that shit mixed into one to make this thing.

story:
a struggling author, finds an app on his phone while he struggles to write a new story. the app lets him become A MIGHTY GOD OF ANTS! ants? wtf??? alright, after killing worshipping ants, he gets the evil god perk. he also now has access to the first plot armour of the story, aka the god store. as he purchases powers with the coins he gets from killing ants. he wants to see if he has awakened as a hunter. ah yes this story also has portals, hunters, monsters and items. he then has a chance encounter with a hunter to make her his deciple.... this is gonna take a while so i will leave it there.

ratings:
art: 8/10 its pretty good, no complaints about it, the characters look dope, and monsters look incredible.
character development: 5/10 its not great but its there. so a passing grade is due.
worldbuilding: 2/10 what the actual fuck am i reading man... look not being able to decide between 2 cool ideas and implementing both is fine. example: murim login. but like 10 different ideas smashed into one is a horrible fucking idea...
story: 4/10 idk like every 3-4 chapters a different thrope takes the lead and nothing makes real sense.
overall rating: 4/10 i dont hate this manhwa which is weird... but i dont like it either. this manhwa doesnt have an identity because it has too many of them, the actual author of this story, thought it would be a fantastic idea to mesh, constillations, civillization building, hunters and dungeons, inception of authors entering their stories, downloading an app on your mobile phone to make you become op and a sysyem thropes all mashed together to create this steaming pile of shi... and i still was entertained.

final thoughts:
i honestly dont know what to say, i hate it but i dont hate it. i enjoyed reading it even though the idea of this manhwa alone pisses me off. just stick to 1 or 2 ideas and go with it instead of this shit. author feels like he is competent enough to take on anyone of these thropes/genre's on alone or even a 2in1 for that matter. but because he has so many of them in one it feels shit to read it. give it a shot yourself and you will understand what i mean.
thats it, i have no negative or postive thing to say about this other than "what the fuck am i reading???"
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yilo UnbalancedQuota - 1715037786
why are you looking for another mans dick? seems sus. wanna explain yourself?https://i.postimg.cc/TPsgNm5v/i.jpg
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yilo Formless Sword - 1715036347
i am sure you will figure out what i meant by this in a chapter or two hunderd... if i spill the beans its too big of a spoiler.
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yilo Ballsdeep69 - 1715031645
aparently he is working with a micro biologist from the zoo.
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yilo UnbalancedQuota - 1715030162
wtf? stopming on them now may give you a little bit of coins. but what if you could get x100000000 ammount of coins by letting the whole ant colony worship you? sometimes you need to look father than your dick.
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yilo Dice87 - 1715007039
most likely mistranslation. my guess would be like spiked minatour.
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yilo Monad - 1714990445
right this was my line of thinking too. i am glad i am not the only one. yes i fully agree with women becoming half virgins, memories about your first time are half the experience.
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yilo Neko Majin C - 1714948206
what, so that he can eat the idiots with the clipboards? yeah surely that will go well.
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