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yilo
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yilo - 1698125584
yeah ngl this is utter bullshit and garbage. mfker claims to be 29year old, acts like an actual child... idk what universe you are from but if you gonna claim that a 29year old who retains their memories that has reincarnated into a 7year olds body is gonna act like that. you have made several mistakes in life and have not learned how humans work. also wtf is up with the mc accepting 2 complete strangers as his parents when he knows he has an actual parent from his other life? this is why it is hard to write isekai stories with people who retain their memories. it just break all elusion and immersion the moment your dogshit writing skills get exposed for the tiniest miniscule thing. honestly speaking if you wanna be an artist/author/mangaka do not write an isekai, dont even look at the genre. it will only bring you scrutiny. you might make some quick cash but the infamy you will get from it will make you regret it for the rest of your career. just like the artist and author of this story they both suck and are thus blacklisted by me and many others.

end of rant.
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yilo - 1698123840
https://i.postimg.cc/q7VPQcRk/i.jpg
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yilo Hentai Protag - 1698123177
i understand why they would design it that way, you dont want people to abuse xp to lvl up cultivation in the long run. you want them to cultivate and get actual enlightenment to lvl up so they arent dependant on the system. but ohwell not my story.
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yilo - 1698039584
also since i cant reply to old disqus comments with the new system imma just put this here as a reply to CrazyDragon.

there is also the issue that she not only has to sacrifice her time, any decision she makes can cost lives of multiple people or the whole city for that matter to be lost. that is immense pressure, even if she can handle most of the job well she has to decide to actually kill people, send spies, assassins,  order people to steal and even sometimes to surpress an uprising by completely annahilating the opposite family down to the last child which is so mental that only a handfull people can make that decision without breaking their sanity. i would not want neither myself nor my daughter to be in that situation.
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yilo - 1698038670
little cockroach yehan thinks ziyun goes out and teaches people how to speak.
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yilo Hentai Protag - 1698036161
idk what to say to that so here have this: https://i.postimg.cc/1z0fkrxR/i.jpg
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yilo Segan - 1698035413
logic? never heard of it.
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yilo Warp-izo - 1698034816
those are rookie numbers you gotta pump those numbers up. he needs 365 wives 1 for each day of the year.
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yilo Caru - 1697961406
there are many problems with disqus, altough this system can solve some of them but this isnt good compared to disqus.
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yilo User-9565650615 - 1697961326
spamming is -200 points? so goodluck with the botting let me know how it goes.
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yilo - 1697948201
review for those of you who consider reading this, warning contains some spoiler so read at own risk.

do you like murim stories? do you like dungeons and hunters? do you like necromancers? well this story has all of it! a super op maincharacter, alot weird and wacky monsters, weird ass murim guys, spirits, summons, and whole lotta asswooping.

pros and cons:
lets talk about the story: it started off pretty decent, there isnt alot of things that make sense but it was nice. there wasnt alot of things that would make you go wtf is this bullshit? which is good.
the translation however was wack, like every 5-10 chapters we would get different names, different translations, changes to names and places and beings and not to mention how they would fk up some names. was pissing me the fk off to say the least. that is not the manhwas fault but it does affect the manhwa.

the art: for the first 60 chapters the art was actually very good. it wasnt ground breaking but it was unique and nice to see. however after chapter60 or so the art changed i assume they either hired a new artist or the assistant artist became the lead, this usually wouldnt change too much but in this story it does. when you read the story it feels like you are looking at art done by a pro and then art done by a senior student who is still trying to understand his own style. no offense to that student but his work pails in comparison.

my ratings: Art ch1-59 8/10, chapters 60-present 4/10. story 5/10, characters 7/10. world building 7/10. overall rating 6/10

my final toughts:
should you read this story? well to be honest its not horrible and its much better than most takes on dungeons and hunters but there is murim login which is like similair premise to this and that series does this but on a much better scale. so honestly speaking i do not think you should read this if you havent read that story first. because you will hate this story if you read this first and then read that. which isnt fair.

well thats it. read if you have read everything otherwise skip to save your remaining sanity.

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yilo - 1697946767
his god has decended and he still hasnt come to his senses.
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yilo - 1697942451
just when you think you have hit rockbottom you discover that there is another hole in there...
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yilo - 1697884614
how can one drop something they didnt have in the first place. @hero
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yilo - 1697880691
the translation quality seems to have gone waaaaaaay down. that is sad.
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yilo - 1697877223
suddenly final boss music started playing.
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yilo - 1697867198
the name of that sword is surtur's sword right? like the fire giant from norse mythology. https://i.postimg.cc/nLYW9xBc/i.png
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