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sguizzo
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sguizzo - 1705038867
this is a pity...
interesting premise
bad pacing (also tons of wasted time constantly reminding us of "oh btw knight and empress past yadda yadda" every 1-2 chapters taking up half of the pages)
trash progression
school setting and heroines taking turns for their development

overall maybe a 6/10? so far, i've read a lot worse but it's definitely not good either.
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sguizzo - 1705020700
such a sweet mother!
helping her daughter: treated her kindly, taught her properly over the years
helping her son: killed him a few times while mocking him
...lovely.
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sguizzo - 1705000177
idk, she seemed nice in the past, now she's just been kind of an asshole to her son that's been dying everyday for over a year with no friends, family or allies...
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sguizzo - 1704941806
...oyakodon time?
it wasn't in the holy scriptures last time i checked but maybe?
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sguizzo - 1704941654
it's been like at least 5 chapters of random trash punk talking shit, can we please move on already?
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sguizzo - 1704905271
ah yes, woman cries = man bad
can the father just leave the mental trainwreck that is his wife and get together with the other mother please?
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sguizzo - 1704895090
i know her intentions were good but man that execution was fucking awful, she conveyed nothing, didn't manage to reassure him, just said "yeah he's amazing you know, he's important to me, oh but you're important too i guess..." to the brother who sacrificed a good chunk of his life for her so that she could grow up without a care in the world...

my boy deserved a better sister.
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sguizzo Mangaguy - 1704801851
yeah they took the plot with them when they left
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sguizzo - 1704724027
trying to be objective here but, say if the roles were reversed, no feelings from either party, he came to her saying "yo i saw this chick, she was so fucking hot, totally my type, she was so hot whatever she was doing, doesn't this feel like fate?" that would have most likely annoyed her, the only case this would have not bothered the other person is if the other person was quite a bit older/more mature but i know people will start bashing the guy in the next few hours anyway...
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sguizzo - 1704573917
wait so maybe the mother knows...
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sguizzo - 1704552945
just came here to say every time i read the title it cracks me up, always a quick good laugh.
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sguizzo - 1704548948
huh, maria and imaginary pregnancy... biblical reference?
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sguizzo - 1704520804
nah this is terrible, author just went ahead and made one of the most unlikeable characters i've seen and then made her one of the "heroines".
MC has always liked the smart twin and over the years busted his ass to try and appeal to her cause "she only likes someone that's better than her" as she says, SHE actually liked him back and KNEW what he was doing and why and enjoyed that almost desperate, hopeless longing he had for her and kept kicking him whenever he came close (whenever he barely beat her on a test she said "i wasn't even trying, i just did it in a rush and slept till the end") making him feel like he could never reach her... then comes the sporty twin, which wasn't a fucking bitch and asked him out, he thought he had no chance with the smart twin so decided to give it a try and they dated for a few years and he fell in love with his gf, the sporty twin, but then she felt bad for her shitty sister, dumped him and told him to go date his sister.

the story goes on with MC trying to date the shitty smart twin but still caring more about the one who actually was a decent human being (the sporty twin), the smart twin acting like a victim because "why do you like her more? it's unfair!" -yeah guess what, that's what being a bitch for years gets you- and the other 2 trying to make this bitch happy while being unable to let each other go.

as of ch.10, i wouldn't recommend anyone to read this trash.
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sguizzo - 1704519093
so either they're leaving out something here or... naori just sucks, a lot.

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i think that's true but i don't think what he said was a lie either, he just said it in a rude way to facilitate things for her.
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sguizzo - 1704368709
the detective looks a tad too happy talking about bullied and possibly dead kids...
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sguizzo - 1704228266
so... i think MC might be the scientist's son, the perfect result of his research to maximize human potential or something like that
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sguizzo - 1704228008
https://i.postimg.cc/6Q3YKTyB/i.jpg
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