Honestly this manga doesnt need the notebook character. He doesn't fit the vibe of the other characters, and we don't need a character whose whole purpose is exposition to tell us who is who. Just let the dudes fight and the panels do the talking.

This is just dumb

Its that time again. TOURNAMENT ARC!!!

Fuurin's leader is an absolute chad

Great 1st chapter!

MC's partner talking about being serious and then saying he wants to kill a devil as painfully as possible. Like homie if you are serious about protecting people it only matters how efficient you kill them.

Are those working conditions the standard conditions of China? The author made it seem like he was giving them some of the best modern day workers rights. However, those affordances are trash compared to modern society.

This MC isnt working with a full deck. Telling someone to get a loan regardless of interest rates is a dumb move. All the author had to do was have the MC acknowledge the the interest rates when he was doing his presentation and how the profit will outpace interest. Then again, the MC was a failure in the 1st life so it makes sense he wouldn't be great here either.

Okay the MC isnt the smartest one of the bunch. I see why he wasn't successful in his past life.

I hope when its time for me to go, Truck-kun comes for me.

I like this chapter. Had some nice emotional moments and showed how the characters have bonded over all the events that have happened. However, I have on gripe, can artists draw better hugs. Why are all hugs shown as someone just being limp. I dont think I have seen a hug like that happen in real life. I understand showing the panel where the person initiates the hug, but its hard to have any emotional impact when the other person reciprocates the feelings by being a dead fish.

Second Act is going to be wild if all the girls find out his identity.

I'm assuming this will be the first c-section in this world. If Hwabo can pull it off even though he isnt experienced in it, that would be great.

I would agree, unless the author wants to give motivation to destroy all the demons. However, that seems completely against what our MC is about.

Okay Im enjoying the story, but the author took a needless step to get to this point. If you wanted the whole assassination plot, there was no reason to have the elf princess do the whole theatrics of being the assassin. Her logic is to kill him to protect her sister, but she set it up in the bathtub for him to protect her sister if she were to die. She then decides she can't kill the MC, so she then decides to kill herself thus having the MC take care of her sister anyways. None of that makes sense.

Lmao the flying captain falcon kick is the proper way to handle that trash

I hope the MC kills them. If he spares them, there should be a valid reason; otherwise, it seems like its normal for races to kill each other in this world, and he should be operating off demon logic primarily.

Pretty much. It seems like there is a decent story there, but the way the manga executes the story is terrible.

Wait he was specifically hired to be a bodyguard to look after Sylvester. Why would he willingly follow an assignment that leave Sylvester by himself?

The guild lady who made those bets is just an idiot.