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ICastCharm
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268 Comment(s)
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ICastCharm Mazkaban - 1764372271
I, for one, am hopeful his powers will be used for something interesting in the future. For now, this is just a dweller, or a re-skin of The Eminence in Shadow. I have yet to see if this dares to risk and surprise us with original content or simply use the safe, preexisting formula.
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ICastCharm - 1764339267
The shamelessness of blatantly plagiarizing other stories... I won't name any names, but you know what I mean. I'm dropping out now from pure embarrassment.
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ICastCharm - 1763936669
Whelp bing-reading 90 chapters of this made me a little dizzy, but it has definitely been a refreshing read so far. I see this has 120 chapters on other sites.
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I think the fact that he learned to love her for real in her 117th life changed something. She told the lunatic priest that she whished he would remember, and the priest answered that things would be different this time.
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ICastCharm - 1763935139
I remember her asking the lunatic priest that she wanted ML to remember her reincarnations. Maybe he finally remembers and is now trying to help?
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ICastCharm Aura - 1763933892
You think only the main character is insane. Turns out the ML is also insane and that everyone, in fact, is insane. Then at some point you won't be able to tell insane apart from sane, this is when you know, you've gone insane as well.
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ICastCharm - 1763929225
So I was right... It was obvious from the moment we found out the curse was hereditary. Had an inkling she was infertile, but now it's confirmed. This development is definitely interesting and makes the future yet unknown.
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ICastCharm FatalityDX - 1763925905
I hate that you are right
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ICastCharm - 1763918503
Not bad. Let's see if his love can kill.
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ICastCharm - 1763911098
So if my guess is right, the condition for breaking her endless rebirths, is true love. After that, she'll have to bear a child and transfer her curse to said child. I hope this is not the case, since that would be too cruel. But that would explain why both her mother and grandmother suffered under the same curse.
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ICastCharm - 1763820252
At this point I'm still not sure whether the father is an actually aware of the reincarnations or if he is just playing along out of some sort of screwed idea of love.
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ICastCharm noa - 1763819407
So, her saying: "You never loved her" is equivalent to the truth? How does her beliefs dictate what is the truth? If the man said he loved her, then who is she to say otherwise?
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ICastCharm - 1763815714
This is written in a way that makes it feel like you are slowly losing your mind together with the FL. I don't know if liking that is being crazy, but it certainly is refreshing.
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I'm glad, I'm not the only one. Felt like they drew an awkward pose and then smacked the 3D asset of the rifle on top.
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ICastCharm Smokinweed - 1763676678
Fair enough. It's one of the most difficult aspects of writing. To fully insert yourself into all characters is almost impossible, when you have to take both sex, sexuality, personality, mindset and a lot more things into account that makes people who they are. Getting feedback from real people in similar situations might be the only solution to "solve" this problem, but it's nothing like an easy fix. In fact, it might be nothing but wishful thinking.
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ICastCharm Phyrite - 1763673233
That could very well be the case, and I very much like this development. Let's put everything on the line!
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ICastCharm - 1763411736
I see; the Empress was hinting that the songstress will slowly bewitch him into submission. Or at least, she will try.
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ICastCharm Phyrite - 1763403735
He's jesting, surely... to get her to call him father. That's the kind of guy he is right? RIGHT?
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