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Name Withheld - 1727455296
Drink, drank, drunk.
Drink up.
I drank it all.
I have drunk it all.

The translations of this have been superb, but proper grammar is swiftly becoming a lost art-form (and this is an oldie).
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Name Withheld - 1727452439
Poor dude, a woman on each arm and still getting blue balls! Oh, the punishment!
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The fu...? This CEO's a dude!How come pretty much every boss I've ever had has been an arse hole?
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Name Withheld - 1727451331
WTF? It's her place!

And that uncensored pubic mound cover shot surprised me.
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Name Withheld - 1727450760
WTF? Dark haired girl's messed up!
So she encourages light haired chick to have sex with ML... and then she interrupts and becomes a bona fide cock-block?!I think she's starting to be confused, herself, as to what she wants from her relationship with ML.


P.S. I really hate the u added to an o to show the change of sound; years ago, it was always a o with a solid, flat accent line ( so her name should be: Yōko).
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Name Withheld - 1727446155
And this is why women are terrible communicators... but always blame everything on the dude misunderstanding!
So light haired chick, insecure in herself and suspecting the dude either likes darker haired chick or used to, just casually throws that out there for a reaction.

Dark haired chick, comfortable in her situation, curious if she could go on like this longer, considers out loud trying again with the dude.

While the poor dude, who likes the light haired chick but is still, deep down, trying to get over dark haired chick, is frustrated that light haired chick seems to dismiss their relationship as a mere fling, while having the seed planted that he doesn't actually have to get over dark haired chick, because there may be another chance!
But does he like light haired chick too much to risk going back to dark haired chick?


Sigh. Women. But at least they're not impossible to understand (just very, very difficult).
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Name Withheld - 1727444759
Dark haired chick in about 2 seconds: https://i.postimg.cc/zGM0HZ4d/i.jpg
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Name Withheld Darkun2? - 1727362227
Gotcha.

I'm on chapter 14 now - it's been a good read so far.
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Name Withheld - 1727361456
That was a damn good chapter; I really like her guilty expression there, at the end, as if she's sullied the purity of their three-way relationship.
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Name Withheld Darkun2? - 1727360193
Dude, the whole thing is about a man living with two women and engaging in sexual intercourse with them both... how can it not be a love triangle?
I'm just hoping for no lesbian shit, because that'll be when I cash out!
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Name Withheld - 1727359658
Well, that's fucked up.
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Name Withheld - 1727171587
This is kind of weird... but then, some poor suckers always seem to attract these sorts of nutty women.
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Name Withheld - 1727126522
What's that about never putting your dick in crazy...?
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Name Withheld - 1727099274
1/5
Pretty much dog shit.

Knowing this was only 40 chapters and them admittedly flying by, I went against my own judgment and pushed on to the ending... which was just as bad as the rest of this crap!
Basically, some kid goes into an ultra-realistic VR war game, where... wait for it... he dies.And then he keeps dying. Over and over.

To compare this to brilliant works like, Eternally Regressing Knight, is to do both an injustice; it takes around 19 chapters of this shit for anything to happen, as the MC respawns seemingly endlessly, with zero personal or story progression. Worse than that is the fact that, because it's a game, there's never any sense of him being in any real danger. Some may argue that the breaking of his psyche is the real threat, but it's so poorly handled, it feels more like a kid getting frustrated when dying over and over on some stupidly difficult XBox crap.
Thankfully, this does conclude and wasn't just axed, but with the final fight being nothing but blurry lines with speech bubbles thrown in, even the climax is entirely unsatisfying.

I genuinely feel like I've eaten a turd so you won't have to... yet, despite that, there were some readers who seemed to actually enjoy this!
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Name Withheld - 1727098085
A dog shit ending to a dog shit comic.
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Name Withheld - 1727031643
I'm sorry if my negativity has affected anyone's pleasure of reading this - I really should've just dropped it early on - but FFS, this has been one of the biggest bags of shit I've ever suffered to finish.
So now the VR game is actually an alternative reality?

To the author:https://i.postimg.cc/jdR4YpPN/i.jpg
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Name Withheld - 1727030453
And then someone's girlfriend gets captured, just to add cliché to the turd-fire.
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Name Withheld - 1727029985
Thank fuck there are only 8 chapters left. I wonder if making it to the end of this crap unlocks an achievement?
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Name Withheld - 1727028656
Wait... if she resets but he continues, how do they match up?
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Name Withheld - 1727027127
https://i.postimg.cc/fLpxTZBW/i.png
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