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We lost a decent one

I was super interested until it clicked and now I’m not interested as much

His time is disjointed from her linear experience which is cool and almost novel. He’s gonna jump in at random points in her life and help, likely the same story with other girls too. Which, as I said, is cool!

… Until you realize he’s the Doctor

Meh

So she acknowledges Sayuri is a minor but then what? Decides that a little kiss is enough to consider dating a child ~8/9 years younger than her?

Just gonna invite myself in to say that the younger one is now 17 at most

Okay but this is just messed up. I’ve had my contacts fall out at a theme park before and spent the whole day blind. It was sickening to be honest. Why did this have to dredge that up

Ummm just a reminder that the younger sister is 16 and the older friend is (I think) 25

Nah short guys are cute too so long as they embrace it. Heights just a stat who really cares

Also something not discussed is going to the bathroom. They freaked about showers early on but what about just pissing? Surely he has had to wipe her many times by now, yet I’m sure we will see more awkward shenanigans

Okay I just read through the whole thing and I must say I’m heavily intrigued.
It started off feeling rushed and cliche but the pacing has solidified beautifully and the manga feels unique now.
I’m rooting for Lemon at this point, even if she messed up really really badly, she deserves a chance.
But I just hope he makes a decision soon.
Or takes both. That’s an option too

This is simultaneously the fastest pacing of cliches and vents while also the slowest pacing of arcs. Not loving it anymore

Bonded in the dungeon eh? Odd way to say borderline raped

Why the fuck would you give her a unique skill? She was strong without it and that made her compelling

https://i.postimg.cc/tJTF624D/i.jpg

Dawg … that ain’t okay

Ayo?

Mess it up.
Mess it up.
Mess it up.
Mess it up.
Mess it up.

Almost every other girl would be leagues better. FMC has no redeeming features. I don’t care if they throw some more emotional backstory bullshit at us. I refuse to acknowledge her and wish the MC would do anyone or anything else

I feel compelled to utter the forbidden words brothers. Help me! This hath rotten mine brain and turnt the very soul within my body against me!

“Erm. What the sigma?”

This is getting ridiculously dumb