ngl this gives off the same feeling as mangas being close to the axe.
MC let the girl die for no reason, so got into this dumb fight for no reason, dragon dude is super op and there's no hope of even beating him, then author will pull some bs to make him die and that's it.

Chad moment

Dude spent 2 months actually involved in that kingdom, there's no need to expand his liability to that point.
He's a swordmaster, the message can go through from his actions alone.

That's pretty cringe though, why would you kneel before that weak ass king

He is hella strong though, but he's still a mage. If you can reach him before he can cast it's joever

Smile while you can buddy 😭😭

One more cliche wouldn't hurt here, I rest my case.

Being on edge is kind of a chemical process so it doesn't really make sense actually.

she thicc

I like the story but this narration is so bad.
The flashback is way too long, she already reunited with Ed and we're here watching the past without much characterization or progression being made for months.

True. Like, I love the boobas and alldat but this is such a painful read...

We finally get addition lore

Okay this is very bad though, not only is she probably not gonna write that manga, but also now she doesn't know about her severe wasp sting allergy...
There aren't many of them but some people do very much risk dying from those if they don't have immediate medical care.

Now you're in danger girl 😂

MC is a moron, they should have left the kingdom already.

Why is this dumbass shouting

At the same time his progression is believable but the fact that he doesn't connect the "holy" stuff with his race is kind of dumb

I think that's the author's point about women 😭💀💀

This might be one of the few times a romance MC actually connects the dots after a childhood memory dream lmao

konosuba peak