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NatsocWaifu
1491 points
330 Comment(s)
363 Upvote(s)
NatsocWaifu - 1730300875
ngl this gives off the same feeling as mangas being close to the axe.
MC let the girl die for no reason, so got into this dumb fight for no reason, dragon dude is super op and there's no hope of even beating him, then author will pull some bs to make him die and that's it.
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Dude spent 2 months actually involved in that kingdom, there's no need to expand his liability to that point.
He's a swordmaster, the message can go through from his actions alone.
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NatsocWaifu - 1730107842
That's pretty cringe though, why would you kneel before that weak ass king
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NatsocWaifu Redirect - 1730107775
He is hella strong though, but he's still a mage. If you can reach him before he can cast it's joever
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One more cliche wouldn't hurt here, I rest my case.
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Being on edge is kind of a chemical process so it doesn't really make sense actually.
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NatsocWaifu - 1729966549
I like the story but this narration is so bad.
The flashback is way too long, she already reunited with Ed and we're here watching the past without much characterization or progression being made for months.
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NatsocWaifu E P! - 1729928350
True. Like, I love the boobas and alldat but this is such a painful read...
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NatsocWaifu - 1729791993
We finally get addition lore
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NatsocWaifu - 1729791515
Okay this is very bad though, not only is she probably not gonna write that manga, but also now she doesn't know about her severe wasp sting allergy...
There aren't many of them but some people do very much risk dying from those if they don't have immediate medical care.
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NatsocWaifu - 1729596618
Now you're in danger girl 😂
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NatsocWaifu - 1729493312
MC is a moron, they should have left the kingdom already.
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NatsocWaifu - 1729316295
At the same time his progression is believable but the fact that he doesn't connect the "holy" stuff with his race is kind of dumb
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I think that's the author's point about women 😭💀💀
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NatsocWaifu - 1729091557
This might be one of the few times a romance MC actually connects the dots after a childhood memory dream lmao
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