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Joho
618 points
491 Comment(s)
901 Upvote(s)
Joho Combo - 1704034347
Probably won't come to anything considering MC is like 21 and this girl is around 16 or 17. There's more chances he'd get with the cute little senior since she's on her last year and probably already 18
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Joho - 1704030042
Play stupid games win stupid prizes.
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Joho bigboy - 1703971708
They have just been making him buff
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Joho - 1703951895
This art style is straight out of bloodborne
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Joho - 1703857609
From the way they are dressed I'm guessing this people are barbarians and the knights have a reason to kill them, could be totally wrong though
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Joho XCanG - 1703801309
Have you forgotten that they are inside a written story? Not to mention mc is a regressor. The written story must have had mention of the constellations
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Joho - 1703771252
Holy fucking shit that's freaking awesome, that's something so beautiful to have as a code and the fact that knights all over the world follow it is amazing
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Joho - 1703770804
I still find her incredibly disgusting, with all she went in her past life she should've been a wise and mature girl. She went through a ton of shit, got her brother killed and even got old enough to where her daughter was quite old. The fact she just doesn't change even through all of that is just down right amazing. Like how shitty can you be to not change after all that
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Joho Thyself - 1703770394
Sorry to break it for you but the last arc from where the main story is right now is the last good part, the story just gonna go downhill from there.
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Joho Neurofez - 1703769857
True but forget about slow burn this more like trying to get a haircut by cutting each single hair one at a time
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Joho Jarshan - 1703717994
They aren't kids, they're young men and woman, dealing with feelings is something 10 years or under can't handle, but teens can. Or where you and everyone you knew was so emotional stunted as a teen that you weren't even able to know if you liked someone or not? It's not complicated at all. Either you like someone or don't. At least mc realized that the way he acted towards her was straight up just harassment. The female mc is the only that refuses to acknowledge even to herself that she likes mc.
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Joho - 1703518227
Ok we know as the readers that the daughter is messed up, but what is it with those 2 that are so suspicious of them
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Joho AVN_Enjoyer - 1703124924
Why fix her when you can break it more
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Joho - 1703124829
Man that girl is scary
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Joho - 1703115293
That guy from his work is sus af, if he knows of the appearances of your wife and daughter without you having shown them then that means he somehow is stalking them. That for me calls for a royal beat down
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Joho Mogus Man - 1703086518
Yes, really hard. And in fiction even more so.
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Well with the pacing it has it makes sense, it's good to try and give other characters the spotlight but when it takes over the main characters screentime it becomes bad. It would be good if the other characters story was interesting but in this one their story is so bring and tedious that it ruins the whole story
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Joho Camper - 1703006239
You can see in the last pane that he did tranform
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Joho Mangaguy - 1702818013
Even worse is that the kid doesn't even appreciate the dad, sure the dad was a useless dumbass. But for the kid to only look at his struggles and be like yeah he's weak. No wonder the kid became a menace in the timeline of the dumb returner
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Joho - 1702817756
Well this boring, like literal basic of the basic. Overused power, mc with no personality, annoying side characters, dumb villains. Nothing out of this novel is exceptional
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