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Dice_24K - 1718949436
I read and enjoyed this. It is very much rushed towards the end as the last four chapters speed to resolve everything like a person falling down the stairs to get to the bottom faster, but it does finish.

There is one major flaw in this and it is a fundamental misunderstanding of what nuclear powerplants are. Powerplants exist to boil water, regardless if they are nuclear, solar, fuel or coal. Water is boiled to create steam to turn a turbine which generates electricity. Nuclear powerplants do not generate some fancy electricity that involves radiation. So uh... yeah, suspend your disbelief on this detail and enjoy.

Solid 6 or 7 out of 10 - depending how much you can forgive the rushed ending.
Note: I know to some people that a 6/10 is bad because IGN has ruined scores, but to me, 3/10 is "don't read it" bad - and 6/10 is fine. 9 or 10/10 is like "you must read this masterpiece even if you don't like the genre!"
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Dice_24K - 1718923370
Non-officially... bruh. I mean, it is something for the immediate future, especially in terms of surviving, but this mustachioed jerk might just steal all their efforts for himself.
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Dice_24K - 1718920707
Face. lol
https://i.postimg.cc/q77TNJb0/i.png
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Dice_24K - 1718915863
Thank goodness those names weren't serious. PUMPKY is cute.
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Dice_24K - 1718913108
Strange dream that involves the Bri*ish. Oh no.
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Dice_24K Kami-sama - 1718912489
What? The bee obviously flew into a spider's (called honey ant) web, no? You can clearly see the same web in this panel before it appears.
https://i.postimg.cc/0jmbpXb8/i.png

Listen, if you're under such a negative anchoring effect that you're looking for a reason to quit reading, then just do so. Don't do this nonsense.
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Dice_24K - 1718911874
Since everyone else is talking about the art, I may as well give my two cents:
I have a somewhat rare opinion on art in these comics: that the minimum requirement of the art is to portray the events in an understandable way. The art so far pulls that off so, I'm good.
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Dice_24K - 1718910972
For what it is worth, I'd give this a solid 7/10. It's not too long, and isn't filled with too much text - I read it in a day.

I don't wanna spoil anything, so I'll keep quiet.
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Dice_24K - 1718856335
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Dice_24K - 1718856187
Confused but angry face.

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Dice_24K - 1718855980
"I'm not crying, you're crying!" - me, after most of these adorable chapters.

GGs. Thank you for this amazing read.
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Dice_24K - 1718855678
What an outfit... wow.

https://i.postimg.cc/HLJc6hLH/i.png
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Dice_24K - 1718855348
What these bonus chapters are missing are her inner monologue full of fangirling... but it shines through anyway.

https://i.postimg.cc/Y0Hpf4JQ/i.png
https://i.postimg.cc/Y9y96qt3/i.png
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Dice_24K - 1718855055
Who wants to take this out of context? lol

https://i.postimg.cc/2SnWFvbS/i.png
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Dice_24K - 1718854743
Imagine a story where everything is just... fine.
Yawn. Boring.
But a story where everything is just fine that takes place after 100 chapters of plot to get there? Yes please. This is the kind of fan service I want.
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Dice_24K - 1718854429
SO CUTE
you little troublemaker you
https://i.postimg.cc/kgnPjvV1/i.png
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Dice_24K - 1718851883
Okay, I was curious so I looked it up. Corbiculidae is also known as a freshwater basket clam. In short: it isn't that tough. Human teeth are tougher. I was still curious, so I kept looking into it... what about the exceptionally tough corbiculidae teeth? Like, an exception compared to the norm; how tough would that be? Still, not as tough as human teeth.
So yeah... this is like Sorcerer King and its "Nuclear Power Plants" -> completely fictional.

Longer explanation:
Human teeth are designed to withstand the forces of biting and chewing a variety of foods and they last a lifetime. Human teeth is made up of enamel which is the hardest substance in the human body; 96% mineral content, mostly hydroxyapatite. The hardness rating of enamel is about a 5 on the Mohs scale (comparable to steel).
No, I didn't look up what hydroxyapatite is. I had to draw the line on wasting my free time looking into this somewhere.
Meanwhile,
Corbiculidae teeth are used to maintain shell alignment and closure, providing structural stability. It is made up of calcium carbonate which is less hard than enamel; around a 3.5 to 4 on Mohs scale.
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