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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1700021187
My boi really and I mean really needs to learn about boundaries.

You can just kiss someone's neck ? Shoulder ? Without their consent, buddy ! You're coming on too strongly and that's never going to work !
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Vivaldin - 1700020858
Could he actually be a chrysalis, though ?

Like is my boi Domestic Abuse Man gonna turn into a Domestic Abuse Butterfly ?
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Vivaldin - 1699486185
...This mango would really be better in colors; black and white doesn't exactly carry everything that's going on well, although it is pretty, I barely understand what's going on. Dragons, I guess ?

Also, Japanese Homelander is going full Super Saiyan. how is my boi D gonna defeat that ?
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Vivaldin - 1699485822
She is studying the art of the crane game.

...

She won a Ice Cube.
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Vivaldin - 1699290417
Slay, Queen.

But try not to do it this literally.
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Vivaldin - 1698949865
''Became famous as a romantic erotic novelist''

Mr President sir, the Japanese Smut writer has arrived at the White House.

Moving on, assertive gf is skyrocketing herself into the Pantheon of Mango Best Girls, I'm looking forward for more chapters.

...There will be more chapters, right ?
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Vivaldin - 1698948863
Damn, he's completely outmatched; there's no way she can loose the way things are going.

I ain't reading a love-war against his restraint; this is a genuine slaughter with no escape.

Yes, it's absolutely perfect.
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Vivaldin - 1698948528
An amazing move, 10/10.

Though she is coming on very strongly, my soft boi here doesn't seem to understand her advances at all.

But then again, if a woman did the same to me, I fear I'd be too stupid and dense to even notice too.
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Vivaldin - 1698948236
Now this is exactly what I've been waiting for; true assertive Fdom gf mango !

I shall enjoy this to the fullest, for I know this will never ever happen to me !

Also, he just met her for the first, none of them actually spoke a single word, but he's instantly daydreaming about what their life together would look like.

Way too relatable.
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Vivaldin - 1698880949
What does she means by ''son and daughter in law'' ? Did copper bf had a brother that died ? Or a Sister ? I don't remember.
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Vivaldin - 1698880477
So they didn't meet at school ? Huh ? But I though that's where- did they ever explain their first meeting and I just forgot about it ?

Also, Gyoza ? Oh no, the Gyoza propaganda is spreading all the way to this mango too ! I can't escape the cute Goth gf's will !
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Vivaldin - 1698879992
Wait, they have hot water road sprinklers in Japan ? That's the first time I've ever heard about such a thing.

Would it be actually useful, though ? Sure it get rid of the ice and snow, but the amount of water it'd waste, and the energy needed to boil it... I don't have them in Canada, or maybe the reason I don't see them is because we have way much more snow in winter than Japan would ever have.

Also, I'm starting to think copper bf is an autistic acesexual or something. Would explain the hyperfixation on coppersmitting and the lack of sexual drive. But then again, he did just say to watch out about what she wears...

Which is a dumb idea. What is he doing ? Larping as a copper monk ?
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Vivaldin - 1698879044
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ?

So all this time Heterochromia girl was just.. An Executive we've never heard about ? ..Or is it her mom ?

Still, you call her your daughter and care a lot about her for years, but the second she wants a sliver of peace you punch her ? Buddy, you may be the Ultra-Mega Super Duper Death God Invader of Doom, but at least have a shred of decency to care about something ! If he doesn't care about his own daughter, is willing to hurt her even though she's only a vessel for something else that he's supposed to care about, hurting her doesn't make any sense ! You're hurting your Invader guy ! Or wife !

To think the real final boss of Ranger Reject wouldn't be Red or even THE Ranger Reject. No, all this time the true enemy was domestic abuse.
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Vivaldin - 1698878552
Oh nooooooooooooo

She's so gonna die in the next chapter, damn it, I just know it.

Please don't end like this, this isn't how a Yuri should end ! Give me a miracle !

Oh what am I saying.. It's over, Yuribros. Things are packing up.
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Vivaldin - 1698551539
Gyaru at home is cat.

Noted.
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Vivaldin - 1698551025
This mango is driving me insaaaaneeeee

''I want us to make memories together during Golden Week !'' and this guy proceeds to not see her the entire week until the end, but also call EVERYONE ELSE.

Then, this whole chapter isn't even about them, it's all about the other, boring characters that keep falling for this dumb ass dense boi for some reason !! This author managed to create the densest, most bland and idiotically stupid main character I've ever witnessed; he's got no self-awareness, no redeeming qualities, no personality, no goals or dreams, a future or a reason to root for him else to be a most uninteresting self-insert protagonist, it's making be depressed just reading it.

At least in Shirogane-san always wears a mask, no matter how bad the main boi was in all shape and form, but he had a personality ! Or a semblance of it ! This guy ? Nooo ! He can't get a clue when a girl EXPLICITLY asks him on a date ! He calls all his other girls, once again, still in love with him even though he rejected the boring girl and worst girl broke up with him !

Now we'e gonna have to wait until this next volume get translated, a whole part dedicated on a misunderstanding about a relationship that only lasted, what was it again ? Like a week ? A month a best ? And somehow Best Girl is gonna be depressed and mad over it ? Oh and I see it coming, he's not even gonna realize all this is because she loves him ! And that preview ? NO WAY they're gonna kiss, it's another freakin' bait if I ever saw one !

Now, I implore the author to prove me wrong and do something interesting, else I think I'll have to read Rent-a-Girlfriend because somehow it'd be better than reading more of whatever this dumpster fire is.
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Vivaldin - 1698550079
I'm normally okay to even happy when reading soft boi mangos with cute assertive gfs, but,

What do you MEAN ''Aren't you too aggressive today ?'' That's a good thing, you dumb ass ! What the hell is wrong with this boi, seriously ?! She's obviously in love with you and you're like; ''W-wa-ait ! You want to kiss me ?? You're going too far !!!!'' Get a freakin' grip ! Get a clue ! ANYTHING !

She literally said to you ''when I'm a star, catch me'' AND ''when you're ready, fall for me properly''  You can't just ''HAHA, SHE'S SUCH A FRIEND !'' this shit ! Is he stupid ? Why can't he answers her feelings, just once ??

I swear, she deserves so much better than him, it's insane.
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Vivaldin - 1698549670
Emo Maid ! UWWOOOGGH

Bottom Text.
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Vivaldin - 1698462100
Peak is back with a flood of new chapters !

You just love to see it !
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