bro put in good work ngl

the king chill af as usual.

Ellie was supposed to be in their for a year though right? and she had time to explore the edges of the cage.

but then the antagonist ( i forgot his name ) could have just revived his wife in present time instead of trying to rewrite history.

wait so its fine for her to revive them but not for the antagonist to revive his wife??

did i miss something?
did they (MC's group) not really die?

why not just kick her out of the cage and keep the mark?

valid criticism, i think its because she needs to go there so she can teleport back and forth.

bro got infinite regressions

Series starts with mc in an institution where everyone is being tested for their "aptitudes". MC's friends have great aptitude while mc has little. It turns out that the works of the institution are monsters-"succubi" that need humans as "seedbeds" to create their offspring. Mc's friends are killed to create an offspring and MC absorbs the power of the offspring by chance. MC is now hunted by succubi and being used by the humans to fight succubi.

Art- 3.5/10 Art is mid at best and uses cgi/Ai to suppliment the art. it sticks out like a sore thumb, quite distracting.
plot isnt too bad though.

why are people forgetting thats its only Luffy that is an emperor not the whole crew. You cant expect the whole crew to dominate fights when its only Luffy Zoro and Sanji that got buffed in Wano Arc. Take it easy and wait for the rest of the get their moment

if it goes much past this point mc is just as bad as the lion

so he just has to start fires himself to balance the ecosystem?

except his presence actively protects the people there; he's effectively acting as a bodyguard instead of taking such risk with little reward.

Ass f*ck*ng Chapter

they're cooked... MC should have just ran and dusted them

💀💀that last panel

no???
duty to protect... is the whole reason he should have stayed to protect them instead of doing something as fruitless as killing himself.
I mean think about it, what if a monster breaks into the building after he leaves. Are they going to survive? no. They have a higher of survival chance if he stays.

Even if by some miracle he delivered the msg What are they going to do? obviously they're short staffed and the Order of operations isnt going to change cause they're killing all the monsters before rescue.

OMG the grandma's a cunt but nobody knew what would happen. If its her fault for bringing them there its equally the dads fault for not telling her no

the faces look weird after the timeskip. wasnt sure if it was the neck or not but i think the lack of detail in the face for close shots just feels off cause they arent kids anymore.

? author cant have it both ways... either its okay for the #1 to not do anything or its not okay for the guilds to do anything

It was the dad's own fault. he caved to pressure when the obvious choice is to stay and protect the hospital... rescue was obviously going to be sent eventually especially because a health centre would be a priority. Dad gave in to the group like like he gave in to the Grandmother...