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Tagb - 1765218232
At ch12 right now and the series has potential but it's fille with chuuni writting which ruins everything. It feels like a middle schoolers power fantasy rather than a saleseman soul getting into the body of a middle schooler. There are inconsistencies with the system (yes it has the system shit) and most of the plot isn't explained well.

Gonna keep reading to see if it gets any better but right now its a 2.5/10 the story is interesting but the execution is complete ass
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Tagb - 1765216635
This is starting to piss me off, the story has potential but it's filled with this shitty chunni writting which is bummer since the plot is interesting
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Tagb noa - 1765216222
I think it just stayed since the author forgot, but seems like plot armor will give him everything
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Tagb BigSickMan - 1765214158
Yeah but this is a manhua so the author can write as bad as he can and pull whatever shit he wants out of his ass
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Tagb - 1765205326
Im so fucking confused. So his soul got isekai into a parallel version of earth? Which they have in depth physical examsn? On top of having fantasy like assasins and the door to another realm?
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Tagb - 1764972737
Im sorry but i Dont give a shit about some randoms backstory bro
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Tagb - 1764624838
Get a feeling that guy is gonna get killed by hayan
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Tagb - 1764621213
Girl is manipulating the manipulator
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Tagb - 1764615894
Tf did he knock on bro
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Tagb - 1764395671
Holy shit actual swordfighting in my swordfighting manwha?! Actual realistic movements and techniques instead of the flashy lights and big explosion with big ass text saying "heavenly demonic slash bullshit first form" !? Holy shit im in
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Tagb - 1764373418
First time I've seen a cape actually be usefull in combat
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Tagb - 1764373156
Im expecting a new waifu or a pet
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Tagb - 1764311372
Top level aura farming
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Tagb - 1764309820
What is the metaphor with comparing her to a spider? Becuase she is patient in her traps? With hee character a snake would fit her better
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Tagb - 1764309350
I hope big guy gets a redemption path since he didn't look like a complete villain character
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Holding the sword like that is actually plenty safe if you do it the right way it could only lead to small cuts. Also dudes hand are probably as hard as rocks tbh
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Tagb TheImage - 1764132140
Dual blades are ass in real life, with how this series is following relatively realistic sword practice what the mc will gain is probably just more control but I doubt dual blades
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Tagb - 1764081554
Damn finally a fantasy without the fucking goblins, trolls and gnolls/kobolds very refreshing
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Tagb - 1763876765
Wow wtf, I have only seen that blatant sexualization of underage people in hentais dude, didn't even bothered making her overaged with the body of a child. That is just plain pedo behavior from the artist. Not cool
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