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sguizzo
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sguizzo - 1727533369
can author please remove this julian idiot from the story?
every single scene with him has just been trash and feels like a waste of ink...
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sguizzo - 1727341262
looks at the title, looks at her behavior... sure she does...
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sguizzo Zenininin - 1727285615
she's probably been dead for weeks after they started dating
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sguizzo - 1727281897
he was supposed to fix her, instead he's letting her break him
F
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sguizzo MaverickMinion - 1727209998
she's a hardcore misandrist who firmly believes all men are selfish horny trash who would sell their mothers for pussy and she can't stand MC in particular because his existence proves she's wrong
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sguizzo Ballsdeep69 - 1727108241
tbf lemon did dig her own grave, she told him he's not good enough for her and never bothered to correct that statement.
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sguizzo - 1727108104
didn't he like train a lot to withstand and draw out more of turbo granny's power?
he trained like a madman and now wonders why he's fit...
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sguizzo Mr Bubblz - 1727055224
i'm reusing this but "boobs without nips are like a night sky without stars"
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sguizzo - 1726842425
TL, because the original IS (some messed up) porn
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sguizzo Meringue - 1726842249
tbf that's an AI piloting a near indestructible heavily armed piece of incredibly advanced technology, if such an AI doesn't have balls then who could?
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sguizzo Arche - 1726751725
-they don't compliment her on her achievements because "cain did better so of course she should do that much" ...and she's like 5 years old...
-father makes promises he can't keep causing her to behave in a way that will get her in trouble
-mother gets angry at the daughter because she's not being a perfect lady at like 5 years old
there's more but i feel just the first one and my previous comment is enough to make them shitty parents
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sguizzo - 1726740638
so to recap: shitty parents can't raise their children properly so they grow very attached to each other, instead of trying to correct them in a healthy way they just send a 11 year old kid to another continent alone...
the worst thing is he'll probably grow up amazing so they'll think they did a great job at raising him and his sister even though he raised himself and also took care of his sister cause his parents would not.
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not like he could have actually done anything there, had he tried to catch his hand with the net he would have gotten dragged in too.
his best bet would have been calling for help but best case scenario the kid would have died before he got back anyway
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sguizzo - 1726437903
self-NTR?
i'm so confused on how to feel atm
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sguizzo - 1726386535
so dad's got time to go on dates with his new woman but can't spare a few minutes for his son...
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sguizzo Manga Mango - 1726385761
her being extremely emotionally immature has been the key point of like 90% of the drama in the series.
her falling back into old habits when he keeps trying to let her understand he's not another one of those fuckboys sucks and him just sitting there blushing like the average ecchi protagonist after all that happened and in this particular moment is terrible too.
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sguizzo - 1726347245
these developments are actually awful wtf?
she's treating him just like every other dude who just pumped and dumped her and the idiot's there just blushing?
this is seriously disappointing and gross...
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sguizzo - 1726158226
kafka really can't stop taking Ls
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