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RyuuSeiDany
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431 Comment(s)
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733757742
Alright, when an author introduces time travel into the story when it was already getting shit, it's gonna get even shittier
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733463336
' i must use what blue lion taught me: if I use all my energy into a point I can maximize its destructiveness'

Yeah even a 5yo can think of that shit, did you really need the strongest swordsman to teach you that? holy shit so braindead
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733357774
Doesnt matter how brutal they try to make that wolf look, he still looks omega gay with them tails lmfao
Huge fail

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RyuuSeiDany - 1733328369
Sure, ofc she's bait, in the middle of a forest, in a region filled with monsters/demons where no one is setting foot in, and they come right at the second where the beasts would jump her. You cant really write every shit you think of mate, it's gotta make sense first of all, then it must also add some value to the story, and this does neither.

Edit: 'antromorph' kingdom lmfao
Talk about no naming sense, author really trying to use as little braincells as possible
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733269068
That's one absolutely pointless chapter.
Let's hope it gets better and not worse as it did so far...
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733268344
Gay ass speech and gay ass response
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733239080
Fuck this shit fuck this bitch nobody gives a flying fuck about how scary you try to make her be
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733235676
I hate this kind of trash sibling-fearmongering. Oh no my 6th sense just activated and Sean just entered this illusory space with no reason behind it other than 'your sis is here, she gonna smack you once then start crying or some retarded shit'
Miss me with that braindead shit bro
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733038284
Yeeee the art is not enough to carry this, the writing is just so bad, dropping this garbage
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RyuuSeiDany - 1733007891
'You didnt know this thing that has never happened before? How could you???' Fml with this braindead dialogue bruh
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732953590
'They've got a sniper, I wonder if he can easily snipe me if I jump mid-ai... oh fuck' imagine writing that as a surprise, the logic doesn't seem to be there, red flags for the brain of the author
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732953165
'Let's see, we'll go with the classics: villain and... psykers, mmm, yes.' What in the actual fuck is wrong with some writers and their naming sense bro holy shit
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732952420
Actually, wasps, not bees, do in fact infect living organisms with their larvae and they devour their host from their insides. It's what the Alien series used as a reference for their xenomorphs infecting beings and emerging out.

I just learned this yesterday so it's a fun 'coincidence'
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732856128
Well that's some BS backstory 'It just so happens that we have less than a year left until the deadline which coincides with me coming back huehuehue' fml
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732734687
Actual wholesome strong ally? That's a first
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732513258
Kinda pointless waste of time but aight
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RyuuSeiDany - 1732489071
Yup confirmed waste of time, insane decrease in story quality
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