obligatory: for a bl this sure dont have alot of bl. also yandere is the best form of lover

ill keep it short and sweet. i enjoyed it. migth just be in a good mood
art is nice and adds to the atmosphere the story try's to create. the love interests are standard but theres only really one option, nicholas chad.
the story is a normal 'clear the flags' focus keeping to the setting and characters around her. its a little slow but not bad and it didnt hurt my head with plot holes. for a fantasy story it barely focuses on the magic id prolly give it a nice 9/10 for the story its going for. simple premise pretty nice execution
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try listening to ' to my enemies' by saint motel

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cant wait for more

DAMN GRANPA IS STRAPPED https://i.postimg.cc/c4bJwGcz/i.jpg

im just saying calling it a magic train insinuates there are other kinds of train locomotion available. like steam, or diesel.
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i cant feel stakes here cuz bro wont die, at most he'll black out and the guy'll get away

why would the company stop a high end asset like the ice lady from participating in missions as a punishment? thats quite literally crippling some of their best workforce instead of docking pay

Now that i think about it (i should stop at this point) why wouldnt they bring more than necessary when they know gates can mutate and change all willy nilly ig? and don give me bs bout the company wants profits, its more expensive to retrain a immortal back up to such a high combat level. also did they say something about some of the trainees being trained since they were little? how would they do that when they awaken at 20?

she might but its not like he'll die anyway. its like one of those game stories except their stakes are sometimes better. https://i.postimg.cc/W3pVPh2t/i.jpg

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wait why are we fighting with him? why is he so hateful of his team leader? man.. https://i.postimg.cc/Hn5BZ9fM/i.png

bro this chapter made him hiding his power in the training arc stupid and useless. they should have just shown him helping other students from the start as a way to give you a reason why his power wasnt known cause i know those instructors were treating him worse than this. also hope the story picks up a bit soon cause its gonna turn boring soon if not https://i.postimg.cc/26SGYfgC/i.png

ngl them cussing about mc is purely his fault since he hid his power as an average immortal half-heartedly so i feel no satisfaction and can only wonder why he waited so long especially since im sure the instructors were worse than these guys

All these 20 year olds looking old as hell ngl. how old would they have to be for that? or is it cause they need to heal often or someting? were they just the ones who awakened during the crisis at any age past the awakening one? im curious, and sleepy.

so like do immortals age? do they just go into hiding at a certain age or change their names and age using their government positions? does this mean eventually everyone will be an immortal as long as its not a 'keep the bloodline pure' thing? its only been a couple years but i want answers dammit

ive seen worse love stories like the damn cat isekai one. also dont eat food pieces off of animals. its disgusting https://i.postimg.cc/k43SjvsW/i.png

Cook up a case? https://i.postimg.cc/02FWnppC/i.png

thank god nobody built directly on top of any of his notes

I heard Dacia https://i.postimg.cc/hvy4tbXw/i.png

okay im not gonna lie that was too much exposition for me to care about all of it https://i.postimg.cc/qvQzKjcq/i.png

they really trynna blitz this academy arc huh? lets goo