Are you stressed or something? Why are you trying to make an argument out of this discussion? I asked for your opinion and I explained mine. Between adults not everything is 'I am right and you are wrong'. Ofc if you are not mature enough to understand this then evidently I asked the wrong person for some feeback on a webnovel

Overlord has inner monologue but usually is for comedy and even then is very rare. I mean, Overlord has even entire arcs where the protagonist is not even a secondary character

And so he tells the secret to ghosty just so he has the chance of killing the wall minion

That's one of the first things a novel should never do though? Long and many inner monologues

The last panel WTF!?

The last two chapters are much cooler than Boku no Hero final battle

Wow, are you so lonely that you actually tried to befriend me? LMAO. Anyway, from what you have been writing is pretty clear that you were very little or not interested in anime back when the original Naruto manga was being published. All you had been writing about the argument sound like secondhand knowledge. If you don't believe me then ask others that knew how to use the internet and were into Naruto back then.

I dunno, the webnovel was so much worse for me. What parts did you like of the webnovel?

Now we have a clearer picture of you Inferiority complex towards their brother kid, may god bless your soul because:
1st) You thought that your brother friends count as fandom and until this day you still think they considered you their friend too,
2nd) Until today you never noticed such an easy wordplay between Obito and Tobi LMAO! and
3rd) You actually thought for a moment that someone in mangakatana was unaware of the original run of Naruto original series.

From your reactions so far, I would say that you wanted to play in the Minecraft server of the other kids in your class but was never invited and back when Kishimoto did the disappointing reveal the one into Naruto was your brother. Also probably your brother was not into Bleach given your lack of knowledge in the topic. To finish, kid that has the mental age of Arale, the ninja war arc is overall perceived as the worst arc of Naruto and this decadence in the story quality started with Pain but it would not be surprised at all if you think is the greatest, you think soap operas are high quality content after all. If you like stuff is fine but that doesn't change the majority opinion

Under what rock were you living until now? O-BI-TO >> TO-BI. Everyone back then was thinking that it was so obvious that it could not be possibly true and then it was... true

My brother in Christ, Obito revelation is among the most disappointing "twists" in manga history, right up with Ichigo's mother being a Quincy. Why? Because they were the most obvious twists and all readers were kind of expecting that, all the authors had to do was to come with literally anything except what they did in the end and they still failed. Thank you for the unrequested explanation of what you think is not common knowledge in this context. Whatever point you are trying to make though, it doesn't help that you are literally defending a soap opera

Pain is disappointing in a whole different direction, just as Orochimaru. Their ending nullified everything that they represented and that they did

If you don't want others to notice your mental age then do not start an argument with: If you don't think like me then you didn't need to say it....

First Kobin suddenly becomes the long lost brother of the Japanese guy, Japanese guy has legendary showdown against dozens of gangster and still wins, then in his last moments magically Kobin't appears to share a moment of high drama and finally the assassin forgives the mc lol. And from then on Kobin keeps the Japanese guy in his memories, even in his final fight (because obviously not the police, not spec ops, not even James Bond would be able to catch the main enemy, only the mc can do that.. in an epic fight on a boat, a burning boat about to explode ofc). Is cool that you are aware that you like drama and don't need to justify silly plot twists that are there just to deliver the core product of series like these, after these first arcs at least: drama

Actually yakuza are gangster but gangster are not yakuza. What I meant is that from how the story was progressing it looked like the author wanted to make the Japanese guy the main enemy but changed idea at some point, maybe en editor told him to change it to no arise any nationalism fights? Anyway, you can tell this change was kind of abrupt thanks to a few things: the Japanese guy treated the Tattooed guy harshly, tension was being build up for Kobin vs Japanese guy, the Tattooed guy was never meant to be a recurring character due to his face tattoos (Why I think so? Because face tattoos are a pain to draw everytime and only madlad mangakas use them in recurring characters and even then they do so sparingly) if you notice the Korean gangster guy, once it was confirmed that he was the main enemy he loses his flipping tattoos so the artist doesn't need to kill themselves drawing him. The biggest giveaway is how Japanese guy dies tho, he mocks Kobin's mother, he actively tries to ruin his life, he literally tries to kill him and his friends but then he dies in Kobin's arms as if they were brothers. That was so messed up? Dunno, if someone convinced the author to change direction, there was an executive in Naver that was Japanese and the author didn't want to appear as anti-Japan or simply didn't want to fall in the cliche Japan vs Korea but still, the change was too abrupt imho

If you do not like my comment, you don't even need to say it.

No way in hell I'm going to waste my time reading the ramblings of someone so immature that is unable to understand other people have different opinions

Just now you described the core dinamics of a shounen manga

Your comment would be more funny if it was not already established that they have extra lives

Were you dropped on your brain when you were born? Or is a genetic thing?

It feels like the swordsman guy and the girl are in cahoots

Mafia, also Werewolf in its variation, is a social tabletop game were players must uncover the enemy hidden in the group. Basically the players are divided in two group: Villagers and Mafia/Werewolves, each player gets a respective role and skill and they must play to make their own team win. Villagers team win if they kill all Mafia/Werewolves. Here this game is mentioned because Bjorn suspects there's a dangerous guy in the group