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carryonSuitcase
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carryonSuitcase - 1719588335
The titular villain appears by chapter 40 and says that the only reason she is trying to kill everyone and start over is because there was a Star Wars movie that was about to be released but never did because the world ended. Right after this, a psychotic mass murderer woman who is essentially immortal and has also gone crazy after living for 300 years whines about being “a man trapped inside a woman’s body” and talks about how hard it is to live like that. I’ve never dropped a series faster than this.
If you want to read it, stop after the first chapter and develop your own head cannon as to how the rest of the story plays out. Anything past that is just setup with failed payoff.
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carryonSuitcase - 1717192067
It’s been around 50 chapters but the main character has finally put a shirt back on
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carryonSuitcase - 1716077214
https://i.postimg.cc/2yh5Y2zP/i.jpg
real recognize real
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carryonSuitcase - 1712445615
So called knights who don’t even wear armor, let alone gloves.
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> 60 year old woman https://i.postimg.cc/4x0Qcw2N/i.jpg
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As if kids are a consequencehttps://i.postimg.cc/66ktZLQR/i.jpg
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carryonSuitcase - 1710641294
Sticking with other characters, the dad should be a 300-pound slab of muscle with a neck larger than his head.
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carryonSuitcase - 1708055059
This Markus fellow does a crap job at proofreading. Here’s hoping Shego comes back!
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carryonSuitcase - 1707918806
Ebisu is just the author’s punching bag, she can’t catch a break
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carryonSuitcase - 1706478732
Is the author going to take the Verdant Lord route and blast the problem into space? I don’t think any of the characters can actually solve any of the problems here.
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carryonSuitcase - 1706398085
He really opened with, “Let’s commence”
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carryonSuitcase - 1705090848
Read about 100 chapters and then took a break because another series I was reading got a bulk update and I never had an urge to come back to this. It was just boring and uneventful. It has the overdone storytelling technique of showing you the final interesting arc and then time jumps back to the less interesting beginning of the story. All the arcs that followed were just boring.
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carryonSuitcase - 1704846229
“Stanky Wagina”https://i.postimg.cc/Mp5RBKHt/i.jpg
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It looked like a toy crossbow, show any actual bolts it would’ve come with were probably plastic.
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carryonSuitcase - 1703792881
Teenaged girls who self identify as lesbians have a higher chance of teenage pregnancy than those who are straight. Yuri corruption is quite real.
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carryonSuitcase - 1703581062
I feel like I’ve lost the plot. 500 chapters in and there’s too many characters to remember, so many plot lines that get bounced between, so little development towards the end goal, and there’s really no end in sight. Dropping this mess of a story.
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