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carryonSuitcase
376 points
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carryonSuitcase - 1772207951
6/10 with its main draw being the fact that it’s complete, so you don’t have to wait for chapters. Most characters are very one dimensional, with one quirk to separate them from the rest. The worst offenders are the villains who are all basically the same character, overly confident and easily provoked buffoons.


Earlier in the story, fight scenes weren’t amazing, but you could at least understand what was going on, and the characters involved were using actual tactics. Later in the story, after way to much power scaling, every fight turned into a light show with dust and debris everywhere where it is impossible to tell what is going on or who has the upper hand. Character A uses Magic/Sword attack, blowing up terrain, buildings, and Character B. Then Character B emerges from the dust without a single scratch and retaliates with the same destructive power. What ensues is a back and forth light show where nothing is happening until the artist presumably gets burnt out and abruptly ends the fight.

The story itself is OK, but it relies too heavily on dramatic irony and its reverse counterpart, which just creates a lot of artificial suspense where you basically are always out of the loop. The payoff is rarely grand enough to warrant the usage, and after seeing it so many times, it’s like the characters are pulling solutions out of their ass.
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carryonSuitcase - 1772148259
Why was he hesitating? Did he miss the giant “ENTERING SHADOW WORLD” prompt? It’s a fake world, their “happiness” is completely fabricated, as is the rest of the world.
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carryonSuitcase - 1772121523
Is Adjest’s fight finally over? It certainly overstayed its welcome. Just endless light shows with no results for chapters on end.
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carryonSuitcase - 1771897053
“Oho, did you forget I could heal BUILDINGS?”
https://i.postimg.cc/kMxRKjsf/i.png
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carryonSuitcase - 1771887341
Finally the big reveal, although it was exactly what I thought it would be.
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carryonSuitcase - 1771635091
WOW the grammar quality has tanked.
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It’s getting to the point where I wonder if the translation team has even a single person who speaks English, or if they’re just using Google Translate.
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Chapter 175, it’s better because the newer antagonists are actually capable, but they still just talk way too much. Maybe it’s just personal preference, but the one or two antagonists that actually stay silent are more interesting.
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carryonSuitcase - 1770393040
It would’ve been better if the homunculus didn’t start monologuing like literally every other antagonist, but I guess the author just couldn’t help himself.
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carryonSuitcase - 1770049533
Hesitating to kill an enemy in the shadow world, where everything is little more than an illusion, simply makes no sense.
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carryonSuitcase - 1768007109
I’m up to chapter 44 and so far, every single antagonist is the exact same character: infinite confidence with little to no competence, coupled with an obsession with not being looked down upon, and anger issues that lead to lots of screaming and shouting.
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carryonSuitcase - 1768006942
Why was Kraiken so certain that Desir was a tier 1 mage? Literally what prompted that thought?
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carryonSuitcase - 1767973148
Infinite confidence backed by complete incompetence, a stale old trope this author heavily relies upon. Getting angry, overflowing with spittle and drool, because someone thinks one is better than you and charging into battle without a plan, then followed by being instantly defeated. Is there no one who is confident for any reason other than plot-required pride?
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carryonSuitcase - 1767630669
His 30% discount seems to be less of a discount and more like mind control.
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carryonSuitcase - 1766710474
In other words, she acts out because she resents her parents. She resents her mother for taking her away from her father, and she resents her father for not trying to keep her. Many such cases!
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To add to the “1500 year campaign” argument, there’s a reason North Africa is populated by Arabs and not Africans. That reason is the unifying force that was Islam. Muslim expansion out of the Arabian peninsula was a very real thing, and they conquered plenty for quite a long time. It only started to slow down once the Crusades began. Obviously that campaign has largely ended, but it did happen.
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