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UNAMED666
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UNAMED666 - 1723020514
1. mc becomes a mute idiot for unknown reasons. It seems his previous ability to speak was due to possession.
2. the story become too cliche, did the author run out of ideas or was the previous story written by a different person? the quality is too different

The quality of the story really took a nosedive. I will force myself to continue reading it, if there is no progress it is better to stop

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After tthis is bullying arc and it worse than this,
it end around ch 40 and the story become better until end of S1
start in S2 it become mainstream terrorist villain plot, with spamming 4 different fov in every chapter, it so bad that u cant even fokus to the story. It actually will be alot better if they only focus on 1 fov until the end and then switch to another fov, rather than forcing 4 fovs at once

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UNAMED666 - 1723019870
just grab her boobs
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UNAMED666 - 1723019673
At least let her undressed first so she will know how mc feel
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UNAMED666 - 1723002803
This is good but better wait until it reached chapter 50-100, the story is very slow because each chapter has a lot of monologues
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UNAMED666 - 1722998124
Thats literally how yellow flash fight
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UNAMED666 - 1722989496
They really have bird brains
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UNAMED666 - 1722865615
Idk why it censored without reason https://i.postimg.cc/jSWp08Xp/i.png
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UNAMED666 - 1722860249
What a chad
slapping the king and ordering him to become a postman
accepting a marriage proposal from his adopted daughter without hesitation
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UNAMED666 - 1722836545
creepy bug
https://i.postimg.cc/D0Yr7zzc/i.png
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sorry to crush your hopes but reality is always cruel 😆
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Still impossible, We cant even do eyes transplantation. We can now connect the eye muscles to move, but we still can't connect the optic nerve to the brain.Meanwhile, this VR system can connect the five senses from the brain to the computer wirelessly.
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UNAMED666 - 1722832892
No wonder his name is Mute, I cant hear him when he speak. I need to read the subtitle
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chickens like to eat their own species meat so MC can do a spicy barbecue chicken party
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