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Xylen
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Xylen - 1737004942
Dang... That really cooked down😳
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Xylen User-8446758873 - 1736986322
If you read the comment completely, it's not that I have read only two chapters, it's that I reread two chapters after entirely forgetting that I'd already read it. 💁🏼‍♂️

Next, I clearly stated that my commentary was on the "Inital" Premise, which logically means that it's not the whole story, as you have clearly assumed I was commenting on... Despite the fact that I clearly stated what I was commenting on directly was the first two chapters.

Your reading comprehension score is at an entirely arbitrary 3 out of 10 so far. 🤣
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Xylen Xylen - 1736934794
Plot:1
Translation:3
Art:2
Two chapters read... Very little setup, relies on back story exposition, and has less than ideal pacing and exposition

Sounds like a good premise, but it's a bit different from the one on the home page.

Intial Premis: middle school PE instructor gets offered a spare account by a student after showing interest in the game they were talking about, because it gave him a way to compete with others without causing harm, and therefore not violating the precepts of his martial arts instructor and father(?) that prevented him from competing with others. Unfortunately that spare account was already setup as a mage class, and therefore wasn't what the MC wanted.

MC gets in a tussle and wins in chapter two... No wonder I haven't read it in a while, and had forgotten I had already read some of it. The pacing/story telling style, is definitely sub part.

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Xylen - 1736933887
Entry of comment: January 15th, 2025

As nothing here is dated more recently then "2 years ago" I'll ignore the trash talk, give it a go, and then report back after reading as far as possible.
Will it be good, will it be bad... Or Along the lines as one said "MI-MI-MI-MIIIDDD!"

The following are the criteria I'll comment on later

Plot
Translation
Art

And the scale. Will be the following four integers

0 - they did something, but that's it
1 - passable, but nothing special
2 - not bad
3 - a reasonable way to pass time
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Xylen - 1736902935
One Update after nearly four years... Doesn't bode well for the Manga in question...
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