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TheWalrusKing
1480 points
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Probably the latter. Remember how he doesn’t have any talent in the first place. He’s straight up brute forcing almost everything
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TheWalrusKing - 1738180369
Hopefully hiatus ends soon...
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TheWalrusKing - 1738042519
I just binged this and i gotta say that the series’s premise is pretty good. This shamanistic thing hasnt been too developed so its cool to see. However the pacing is pretty random but too fast if anything.
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TheWalrusKing - 1738022667
Bro he has a normal charming smile in the last page
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TheWalrusKing - 1738004746
This wouldn't be bad if he didn't JUST get out of an illusion a couple of chapters ago.
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TheWalrusKing Exlipsey - 1738004724
He got caught in an illusion
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TheWalrusKing - 1738004061
Trolls would be a good addition to MCs retinue
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TheWalrusKing - 1737991716
Naming the bird bomb is very funny. Just like the guy from angry birds. Also the crochet sweater is very cute
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TheWalrusKing - 1737991203
The art continues to be top tier. https://i.postimg.cc/JhM2nYW6/i.jpg
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TheWalrusKing Kale - 1737927023
Its probably one of those things were the 'skills' are there but you can change how they're used
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TheWalrusKing - 1737923663
Funny how the girl thinks that mc should be blushing with holding hands while he has a daughter
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TheWalrusKing - 1737916893
So that’s how it ends huh? It feels a tad rushed. I noticed that there was a timeskip like halfway through this chapter. I don’t dislike the idea of leaving the end of a story open-ended like this but it does leave the reader (or at least me) dazed. It’s like the story was rapidly building to a final arc that came crashing to a stop. Sota’s story has essentially concluded but we don’t see how the side characters that we saw come and go end up. We never see Sugai go see Junpei again, Masami is left in Sota’s shadow, and others are left forgotten.

Overall I think the ending is fine, just how it was displayed was a bit ehhh and I really liked how flushed out and developed this journey was. Thanks for seeing this through to the end and happy reading!
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TheWalrusKing - 1737916135
SHES THE ONE SOTA
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TheWalrusKing - 1737916018
Sugai gets it. I like the training that Masami is doing too
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