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ICastCharm
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ICastCharm - 1732212899
When I started this journey, 'Revenge of the Sword Clan's Hound' only had 30 chapters. I was unsure what to think of the mediocre art-style and story, but HO-LY am I thankful I continued reading. This has been an absolute pleasure to read ever since he cut ties was his clan. Both the art and story feels intriguing, and every cliff-hanger temps me to read the Novel.
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ICastCharm - 1732206990
I think the Anime art-style is nicer, so I'd very much like to see this animated now!
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ICastCharm Cannibox - 1730652143
Nope, you're not crazy alone.
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ICastCharm - 1727366487
Usually, I'm not much for big glamorous incantations, but THIS, was, absolute, CINEMA!
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ICastCharm Darkun2? - 1727360604
Had the exact same thoughts... thank goodness.
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Looks pretty accurate to me.
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ICastCharm Oliwed - 1722702730
Many chapters ago, I speculated Pi being the Devil, the devil is said to control time and you know... Pi can see past, present and future. Pi might be a god right now, but falls from glory when Axel learn time-travel.

As you said, I agree that Pi might have a relation to god. Though I hope this isn't the case, since it would be very cliché and predictable, something we have seen a thousand times before.
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ICastCharm - 1722697504
Best side-character in the last 40 chapters, GJ!
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Yes, many with similar plots you've described.

Here are some of the best I've read:
- Into the Light Once Again (10/10)
- From a Knight to a Lady (7/10)
- Secret Lady (9/10)
- The Villainess Reverses the Hourglass (8/10)

They may not contain all your criteria, but they should all have reincarnation and/or time travel within a novel or other.
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Good question, and as a writer myself, I will try to answer to the best of my abilities.

In the beginning of the story, chapter 1 - 40 ish, the plot and characters were mostly propelled by the MC, with the plot always moving forward, giving the reader a sense of comfort, no matter the situation.

Later, after chapter 40 ish, the world and plot greatly expanded, creating characters with conflicting personalities and misunderstandings, which can feel out of control from a reader's perspective, especially if the same mistakes repeat.

How you handle the plot, characters and conflicts is a fine line between frustration and entertaining. If the plot and end-goal become blurry as a result of repeating conflicts, without good reason, readers will lose interest or start hating on characters.

The MC needs to re-realize what her goals are and how she intends to reach them to keep readers engaged.

Hope this helps:)
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ICastCharm - 1722653156
Okay, hear me out. Pi might be the devil, remember the devil has control over time and Pi can see both past and future.

On another note, this development would be very cliché and honestly, I would hate it.
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ICastCharm - 1722630648
So Igfrit + Lich King, sick combo!
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ICastCharm - 1722624847
If he doesn't question the teacher's foresight, it'd be weird.

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I disagree. For once, all characters so far have questioned MC's age. For them to accept it so fast, is the only problematic element, but as you say, these tropes are common.

On another note:
She wants Axel to experience betrayal, even when she just removed the person responsible for the betrayal?
So she is ready to become the enemy of the Hero, or is this somehow going to resolve itself?

Feels like too much has already changed in the world for it to follow the same timeline as the original world/story.
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ICastCharm - 1722621461
Arghhhhh, let me be clear here.
What does she plan on doing when she releases that elixir to the public, huh!?
Her father and probably all from the duchy knows that MC is the producer. What is she planning on doing if/when her father tells everyone where they are created?
In that case, good luck staying "anonymous", because everyone will know.
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ICastCharm - 1722607889
Has to be one of the craziest nonsensical descriptions I've ever read. I understood ZERO
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ICastCharm - 1721918404
I wasn't sure before, but now I am. The dwarf friend, his vision of the past, they have to be his Deviant ability.

Visions of the past may seem useless at first, but for interrogation and assessment of a person's abilities, it can be a powerful weapon.
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ICastCharm - 1721734630
They are right to be suspicious, Arthur's claims are outrageous. They didn't throw him in handcuffs as soon as they arrived, that's a good sign. A king should be dignified but also righteous, give them time - I say.
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ICastCharm - 1721729245
First time around, I didn't think much of it, but now I notice that Jasmine is already using Arthur's fighting techniques.
https://i.postimg.cc/CLgggsnH/i.png
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