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As you said, I agree that Pi might have a relation to god. Though I hope this isn't the case, since it would be very cliché and predictable, something we have seen a thousand times before.
Here are some of the best I've read:
- Into the Light Once Again (10/10)
- From a Knight to a Lady (7/10)
- Secret Lady (9/10)
- The Villainess Reverses the Hourglass (8/10)
They may not contain all your criteria, but they should all have reincarnation and/or time travel within a novel or other.
In the beginning of the story, chapter 1 - 40 ish, the plot and characters were mostly propelled by the MC, with the plot always moving forward, giving the reader a sense of comfort, no matter the situation.
Later, after chapter 40 ish, the world and plot greatly expanded, creating characters with conflicting personalities and misunderstandings, which can feel out of control from a reader's perspective, especially if the same mistakes repeat.
How you handle the plot, characters and conflicts is a fine line between frustration and entertaining. If the plot and end-goal become blurry as a result of repeating conflicts, without good reason, readers will lose interest or start hating on characters.
The MC needs to re-realize what her goals are and how she intends to reach them to keep readers engaged.
Hope this helps:)
On another note, this development would be very cliché and honestly, I would hate it.
On another note:
She wants Axel to experience betrayal, even when she just removed the person responsible for the betrayal?
So she is ready to become the enemy of the Hero, or is this somehow going to resolve itself?
Feels like too much has already changed in the world for it to follow the same timeline as the original world/story.
What does she plan on doing when she releases that elixir to the public, huh!?
Her father and probably all from the duchy knows that MC is the producer. What is she planning on doing if/when her father tells everyone where they are created?
In that case, good luck staying "anonymous", because everyone will know.
Visions of the past may seem useless at first, but for interrogation and assessment of a person's abilities, it can be a powerful weapon.
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