Well, honestly my English skill is directly from observing how other people write for over 6 year, but i think you're fine at "Plan come true". But maybe could help you a bit, Here: Easier could be seemingly, on a lot of "Is" as in pronoun should be its or he to be consistent

I see I see

It's immediately after she bought him, it's not a spoiler. I guess i didn't specify it enough, sorry

Theory one of why iris is irritated not being able to lower reilin status is She's after the family money

When reilin healed him

Mmm..... I don't have good feeling about this, he's in the cover so he is important to the story in some sort of way, but hes acting like a total psychopath

I see... Well, I stand corrected. And why the hell did they make his glowup so hot😭

Oh, wait what? Did the chapter mentioned demi human grows quick? I kinda skip the long detail of it.

Ofl gonna go confused why her bodyguard are leaving

IT'S A CHILD!!!? AND THAT'S YOUR FIRST THOUGHT????!!

We did it anyway

https://i.postimg.cc/pdP077cX/i.pngI forgot the word for the old person, but i want to hurt him

Reilin.... That sounds a lot like Reinelle... WAIT, ARE THEY SISTER?!😳😳https://i.postimg.cc/FzB0j0Z0/i.png

It seems i already have bookmarked that, i suppose that's going to be my next manwha i read, Thank you! ^_^https://i.postimg.cc/k5QWzkNx/i.png

Yuh

The villainess stationary store or something along lik it

ALL HAIL LORD IMMORTAL LOCCH!!!!🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥

IF I CAN'T HAVE A HAPPY LIFE! YOU NORMIES CANT EITHER!https://i.postimg.cc/qRZF8C2n/i.png

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Full Name: Ichinose Asuna | Age: 17 | Birthday: March 24 | Height: 167cm | Game: Blue Archive